Re: Annual report - ready to print (almost)

[Emily Gonyer <emilyyrose gmail com>]

Hey all, just a few things:

Page 5 in  ..."binary that not only to benefits application
developers" remove the 'to' after "..source code and binary

Page 7,
-third paragraph ".. While the philosophy to keep things simply
remains," change "simply" to "simple"
-fifth paragraph ..."to be official part of GNOME": add 'an' before
'official part of GNOME', also drop the -on- in ..."next release and
-on- specific modules.

Page 10,
-Boston Summit, 2nd paragraph: .."Gtk+?/WebKit, Clutter 2.0, and
Gestures among others." - I'm sure I meant to determine which vs of
Gtk+ was worked, on, I'd assume 3 at this point, though I'm not 100%
on that. (2010)
- , add a comma after Evolution ..."Evolution Gstreamer, packaging
GNOME in Debian and many others."

Page 12,
- change 'server' to 'served': "The conference server as warm up for
the hackfest" and add "a" after "served as" so its "served as a warm
up",
- remo 'to' :  "GNOME documentation team to engage with other
fellows." ..'team engage with other fellows'

Under 'Accessibility hackfest agenda'
- add "The" and change 'Plans' to plan before the first line: "The
Plans for GNOME 3.."

Page 15
- need a space between 2011 and the: "In 2011the GNOME's outreach"
- change "runs" to "ran": "runs through March 15, 2012"

- remove ? before 'LinkedIn': "manager on ?LinkedIn"

Page 18: can we move the link
(http://openhatch.org/wiki/Open_Source_Workshop) down to the bottom?
Or put a [1] in and then the link either after the question is fully
answered or at the end of the interview (moving any/all others as
well).

Page 20: link: "mentoring howto:
http://people.gnome.org/~federico/docs/summer­of­code­mentoring­howto/";

Page 21: 2 links : .."available at http://youtu.be/jHB­N_rOZA* The 7th
GNOME Forum" and end of 3rd paragraph


Otherwise it looks great!! Thanks for all the hardwork!!

Emily

On Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 10:30 PM, Diego Escalante Urrelo
<diegoe gnome org> wrote:
> Commenting is easy so here I go:
>
> - Isn't Karen's signature a bit "dirty"?
>
> - On the cover, isn't Annual Report a bit missaligned? Or is it just a
> printing consideration? Also, the all caps looks a bit "Arialish"
>
> - Why not serif fonts for the main text too? Like in page 8 for
> quotes, I believe this is usually easier to read on big text blocks.
> (sorry, this is by far the naggiest comment)
>
> - On page 11/12 for Hackfests, the photo that is going to be cut in
> the middle... Literally cuts down the girl in the middle. Any chance
> to use another (the one with the laptops perhaps, since the middle is
> empty, although it looks cool on the left already)?
>
> - On page 19, the interview with Daniel has some weird spacing, I mean
> that there is a lot of blank before the title. I fail to see the
> reason, I suppose it is some aligment reason.
>
> Now that you hate me, I will go on and say that it looks really cool
> :-). Pages are well built, photos well used and the simplicity is
> really GNOMEish.
>
> Thank you for all the work, you are my hero <3
>
> On Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 8:56 PM, Andreas Nilsson <lists andreasn se> wrote:
>> Hi!
>> Designed and ready, now ready for proof reading before we print it.
>> http://andreasn.myownb3.com/temp/annual-report.pdf
>> - Andreas
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