El mar, 11-09-2007 a las 21:02 +0300, Lucas Rocha escribió: > Hi, > > > Was checking out the release notes draft. Minor comments: > > > > - "Ubuntu Linux" is a phrase not used by the Ubuntu project. It > > should either simply be "Ubuntu", or something like "Ubuntu GNU/Linux > > distribution". > > I agree. > > > - Two of the images on the page are particularly large in file size. > > rnintroduction-screenshot.png is 400kb and rnusers-eog.png is 580kb. > > They are both very nice, but a bit largish for slower connections. > > Given that rnintroduction-screenshot.png is visible on the first page of > > the release notes, it may be worth replacing with something lighter. > > Given that it's a scaled-down image anyway, makes sense to use a jpg > > instead that takes 250kb from a quick test here. > > +1. > > > - "The Release Notes are available in several languages..." This > > paragraph follows the one ending "You can learn more about the changes > > that happened in GNOME 2.18 from its release notes." It's probably just > > me, but it would be more clear to replace it with "This release notes > > are available in several languages...". > > I didn't get it. What exactly chould be changed? > > > - Evince section doesn't say whether you can save the filled-in PDF > > files. > > Any evince maintainer around to confirm? Writing to pdf is not yet supported by poppler, so it's not possible to save the filled-in pdf. However it's possible to print it, so you can just print it to a pdf file. > > - May want to link Cairo to its website as it's an external module. > > Also, technically, "Cairo" should be replaced by "cairo graphics > > library", not capitalized. > > Trademark policy? > > Murray, what do you think? > > --lucasr -- Carlos Garcia Campos elkalmail yahoo es carlosgc gnome org http://carlosgc.linups.org PGP key: http://pgp.mit.edu:11371/pks/lookup?op=get&search=0x523E6462
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