Minor comments about the release notes draft

[Behdad Esfahbod <behdad behdad org>]

Hi,

Was checking out the release notes draft.  Minor comments:

  - "Ubuntu Linux" is a phrase not used by the Ubuntu project.  It
should either simply be "Ubuntu", or something like "Ubuntu GNU/Linux
distribution".

  - Two of the images on the page are particularly large in file size.
rnintroduction-screenshot.png is 400kb and rnusers-eog.png is 580kb.
They are both very nice, but a bit largish for slower connections.
Given that rnintroduction-screenshot.png is visible on the first page of
the release notes, it may be worth replacing with something lighter.
Given that it's a scaled-down image anyway, makes sense to use a jpg
instead that takes 250kb from a quick test here.

  - "The Release Notes are available in several languages..."  This
paragraph follows the one ending "You can learn more about the changes
that happened in GNOME 2.18 from its release notes."  It's probably just
me, but it would be more clear to replace it with "This release notes
are available in several languages...".

  - Evince section doesn't say whether you can save the filled-in PDF
files.

  - May want to link Cairo to its website as it's an external module.
Also, technically, "Cairo" should be replaced by "cairo graphics
library", not capitalized.



Thanks for the work, it looks awesome!

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