Re: Minor comments about the release notes draft

[Behdad Esfahbod <behdad behdad org>]

On Tue, 2007-09-11 at 21:02 +0300, Lucas Rocha wrote:
> >   - "The Release Notes are available in several languages..."  This
> > paragraph follows the one ending "You can learn more about the changes
> > that happened in GNOME 2.18 from its release notes."  It's probably just
> > me, but it would be more clear to replace it with "This release notes
> > are available in several languages...".
> 
> I didn't get it. What exactly chould be changed?

"The Release Notes are available" -> "These release notes are available"

> >   - Evince section doesn't say whether you can save the filled-in PDF
> > files.
> 
> Any evince maintainer around to confirm?
> 
> >   - May want to link Cairo to its website as it's an external module.
> > Also, technically, "Cairo" should be replaced by "cairo graphics
> > library", not capitalized.
> 
> Trademark policy?

Not sure whose trademark policy you mean.  This is the way Carl prefers
people write it.

> Murray, what do you think?
> 
> --lucasr
> 
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