Re: [guadec-list] final version ofguadec press release.

[Sriram Ramkrishna <sri aracnet com>]

Thanks for your edits, I will correct adn send out later.  Much appreciate
the feedback! :)

sri

On Tue, Jun 20, 2006 at 09:18:29AM +0200, Murray Cumming wrote:
> > Okay, this is it.  Unless something looks really off, the let
> > me know.  Otherwise, let's get this baby out.
> 
> It's quite professional now, but I think it needs these small changes to
> really make the grade:
> 
> - Opening keynote will be presented by Jeff Waugh
> + The opening keynote will be presented by Jeff Waugh
> 
> - Other speakers include Jim Gettys, Vice President of Engineering of the
> One Laptop Per Child  who will be presenting OLPC, a community effort to
> give children a chance to learn using specially designed laptops, titled 
> "Challenges and Opportunities of the $100 laptop" (can we rewrite this
> para).
> + Other speakers include Jim Gettys, Vice President of Engineering of the
> One Laptop Per Child project (OLPC), whose "Challenges and Opportunities
> of the $100 laptop" presentation will describe this community effort to
> support childrens' education by providing specially designed laptops.
> 
> - Simon Philipps
> + Simon Phipps
> (We must get this right)
> 
> - Sebastian Bacher and Daniel Holbach at Canonical, will talk
> + Sebastian Bacher and Daniel Holbach at Canonical will talk
> 
> - More than 30 GNOME related software projects will be represented ranging
> + More than 30 GNOME related software projects will be represented, ranging
> 
> - F-Spot for photo managing software, Gossip for instant messaging client,
> Beagle for desktop search, and Ekiga ? a videoconferencing and VOIP
> software.
> + F-Spot for photo managing, Gossip for instant messaging, Beagle for
> desktop search, and Ekiga ? a videoconferencing and VOIP client.
> 
> - The first GUADEC which was started in Paris in June 2000 is the
> gathering of GNOME developers from around the world.
> + GUADEC, which first took place in Paris in June 2000, is a gathering of
> GNOME developers from around the world.
> 
> - GNOME development is sponsored by many companies.  Some of them are:
> + GNOME development is sponsored by many companies.  These include:
> 
> - Sun Microsystems (sun.com/software/opensource/), a significant
> participant and contributor to industry-changing open source projects
> including;
> + Sun Microsystems (sun.com/software/opensource/), a significant
> participant and contributor to industry-changing open source projects;
> 
> Doing this on the wiki in future might make this easier. Many thanks, Sri.
> 
> Murray Cumming
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