Re: clock applet docs need editing

["Kristin E Thomas" <kristint us ibm com>]

>Hi John,
>
>The Clock applet is one of the applets that Sun will use, so the Sun
>documentation team have done a version of this online manual. This manual
is
>available in xml, and is written to the GDSG. See attached html file - we
didn't
>create this html using the customization stylesheet layers so there are a
few
>oddities, but still you can see the intended result. The salient
differences
>from the original version are as follows:
>
>- We have used a task-oriented approach, as even small applets benefit
from a
>task-oriented rather than a UI-oriented approach.
>
>- We haven't included the information about setting time. Information like
this
>is interesting, but ultimately not about the functionality of the UI in
>question. This type of information should ideally be captured elsewhere.
>
>- We haven't included the Author, License sections in the body of the
manual.
>GFDL requirements and accreditations are all fully covered by the title
page.
>
>I have included all recent changes in the UI in the attached manual,
reviewed
>against the Clock applet that is part of the current 2.0 desktop. This
Clock
>applet manual will be one of the manuals that Sun will put back to the
>community, and which Sun will ultimately translate. Of course, it's
completely
>up to the community to decide which version is best for the community
GNOME
>core.
>
>Pat

So I should still edit the other version?  I wasn't sure if you wanted to
just go ahead and use the Sun version or not.  Let me know.

Thanks,
Kristin


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