GNOME 3.24 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 1



Hellooo engagement.


Release Video coming up and I need feedback.

https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentythree/ReleaseVideo

inspirational questions for you:
- How can we spice up the narrative a bit?
- Can you help me reduce repeating wordings?
- Anything that seems redundant / can be boiled down?


Write suggestions as reply to this e-mail or on the wiki page. Thank you!

-Bastian


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