Re: GNOME 3.22 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 1

[Nuritzi Sanchez <nuritzis stanfordalumni org>]

Hey Bastian, 

Great job, as always! I've added some suggestions and questions at the bottom of the wiki page (https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo). 

Thanks for all your effort on this - I can't wait to see it! :)

Best, 
Nuritzi

On Tue, Sep 6, 2016 at 5:06 AM, Bastian Ilso <hougaard junior gmail com> wrote:

Hi everyone,

I need your input on the 3.22 Release Video manuscript. You can read it here:

https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo

We reach out to ~100,000 viewers, let's strongly consider what we show:

- Is there something about the release you think we should cover better?

- Is there something taking too much narrator time?

- Do you have suggestions for music (for CC-BY-SA 4.0)?

My thoughts on what the video should cover:

 - Emphasize our values: being the modern, bleeding-edge, community-powered, free and open desktop.

 - Talk about the technological advancements we are making (fx sandboxing/distribution), but keep it on a high level.

 - Show highlights of the new application features, thank our contributors.

 - Make a call for new contributors towards the end, they can help us make a difference.

Feel free to:

1) Edit the manuscript as you wish.

2) Reply with feedback in this thread.

3) Reply with feedback on the wiki page.

Your input is very valuable, I expect to finish the manuscript by Sunday the 11th. Thank you so much!

-Bastian

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