Re: 3.20 release notes proofreading

[Bastien Nocera <hadess hadess net>]

On Fri, 2016-03-11 at 15:25 +0000, Allan Day wrote:
> Hi everyone,
>
> We are really short on time for the release notes, and they need to
> be completed ASAP. As a result, I'm trying to finalise each page in
> sequence, so it can be proof read while the next pages are being
> written up.
>
> The first page (called index.page) is ready for proof reading. If
> anyone can review it and give feedback, that would be great. As
> usual, the notes can be found here:
>
> https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/
>
> You'll need the gnome-3-20 branch:
>
> https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/log/?h=gnome-3-20
>
> Many thanks to Adelia for helping out with the release notes - we'd
> be further behind than we already are without her!

2 verbs:
https://git.gnome.org/browse/release-notes/tree/help/C/index.page?h=gnome-3-20#n66

Couldn't see anything blatantly wrong in the rest.

Thanks for working on this!

Cheers