Hi Jeff, Thanks again for working on this. I went through it again and spotted these that need corrections; - Page 1; typo in first para, line 2 - “GNOME has driven developoment…” - Page 2; typo in line 1 "The GNOME Foundation is the charitable non-profit organizations…” Should be “organization” - Event timeline on pages 4 and 5; standardize all the word “hackfests” to “Hackfests” (capital H, currently some are with capital H some aren’t) - general comment here; some of the lines appear to be detached where they are supposed to touch the next object, whereas some overlap each other, and a few lines went too deep into the circles. - Page 7; Format of the dates under the respective titles aren’t consistent; please use “to” instead of “-“ e.g. Cambridge, UK — January 25 to 29, 2015. Need to amend for Web Engines, Docs, West Coast Summit and Open Help. - Page 7; Under Web Engines, first para, line 4 - typo "developers gathered to to discuss” … delete extra “to” - Page 7; Amend “San Francisco, USA” to “San Francisco, CA, USA” to be consistent with “Cincinnati, OH, USA” - Page 15; first sentence under header “Ensuring safety…” … delete the comma before the em dash. - Page 16; at the end of the description text… amend “easy to use” to “easy-to-use”. If anyone spots anything else, has any comments/feedbacks, please do relay them by Saturday as Jeff said :) best, adelia
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