Re: Promo Video Storyboard: Feedback Wanted
- From: Sriram Ramkrishna <sri ramkrishna me>
- To: Bastian Hougaard <gnome rvzt net>
- Cc: GNOME Marketing List <marketing-list gnome org>
- Subject: Re: Promo Video Storyboard: Feedback Wanted
- Date: Sat, 25 May 2013 12:46:11 -0700
Hey I went through your storyboard! Here is my feedback:
1) Why do you have an initial spark that disappears and then reappears? Is that some kind of attention grabber?
2) I'm not sure I understand what "frog perspective" means? So you have shiny pieces coming from the initial spark and then they fall against the camera?
The rest seems okay from my perspective.. but I'm dubious about the intro.
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