Re: Some feedback on presentation..

[Dave Neary <dneary gnome org>]

Hi Sri,

Sriram Ramkrishna wrote:
> I've written most of the presentation, but I would like some suggestions
> to improve it.  I'll be presenting it at Northwest Linuxfest this Saturday.

Thanks! Keep us posted how it goes.

First impressions are that the content is great, but needs to be more
graphic & less wordy.

I'd spread the whole thing out. Slides 3 & 4 are too wordy to me, and
could potentially be split over 10 slides:

(Slide #: text: image)
3: 2008 hackfest: photo maybe?
http://mairin.wordpress.com/2010/02/23/gnome-ux-hackfest-photos/ for example
4: Design & user experience: Early mock-up(s) from wiki/pencil drawings
ideal - one candidate: http://www.flickr.com/photos/mairin/4384751226/
Another source:
http://www.gnome.org/~mccann/shell/design/GNOME_Shell-20091114.pdf
Another: http://blogs.gnome.org/seth/2010/02/26/let-the-wild-rumpus-begin/
5: Release: Screenshot/video from http://gnome3.org/
6: Design principles: Something "designy" from Google Images (like
Charles de Gaulle airport maybe?
http://www.flickr.com/photos/62904109 N00/2801145645/)
7: Clutter/distraction free: Screenshot of shell
8: Task focussed: Workspace switch screenshot (talk about Hamster
"workspace to task" feature!)
9: Document centric: Some kind of screenshot to show what this means -
perhaps something from Federico's 2008 GUADEC presentation
10: Revamp platform: No good ideas for an image here. Talk about
API/ABI, GTK+ revamp & GObject introspection, fewer dependencies,
consistent interfaces, etc.

You can then take the audience through a slideshow of screenshots
pointing out key features - I'd point to the revamped control center
too, even though it's still in progress (worth pointing out too).

And finally I'd replace slide 9 with some screenshots of core apps that
are ported to GNOME 3 or have been included as "featured apps" -
Shotwell, Totem, Rhythmbox, Simple Scan: http://www.gnome.org/applications/

This is also the opportunity to explain the revamping of the release sets.

Hope this is the kind of feedback you were hoping for!

Cheers,
Dave.

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Dave Neary
GNOME Foundation member
dneary gnome org