Re: GNOME project description for EuroOSCON .org day]



On Sat, 2006-08-05 at 14:36 +0100, Joachim Noreiko wrote:

Comments?

It's a lot clearer :)

Check from native speakers?

'comprise' never goes with 'of'.
'Comprising hundreds of volunteer developers...'

'Target platforms are both the desktop as well
embedded devices.'
You don't need 'both' AND 'as well'. 

Okay, thanks!

Remaining question: they need the GNOME logo in web and print
resolution. A web logo is not too difficult to find, but in print
resolution I don't know where to take it from.

Marcus




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