Re: GNOME project description for EuroOSCON .org day]

[Marcus Bauer <marcus bauer gmail com>]

On Sat, 2006-08-05 at 14:36 +0100, Joachim Noreiko wrote:

> > Comments?
>
> It's a lot clearer :)
>
> > Check from native speakers?
>
> 'comprise' never goes with 'of'.
> 'Comprising hundreds of volunteer developers...'
>
> 'Target platforms are both the desktop as well
> embedded devices.'
> You don't need 'both' AND 'as well'. 

Okay, thanks!

Remaining question: they need the GNOME logo in web and print
resolution. A web logo is not too difficult to find, but in print
resolution I don't know where to take it from.

Marcus