[gnome-user-docs] Update backup-how.page Line 31: Replaced "some other" with "another" former seemed dismissive Line 4

[Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit 254c68eed9acf0d47d321f50fa4311b7f311a513
Author: Klein Kravis <kleinkravis44 outlook com>
Date:   Sat May 23 00:41:44 2020 +0000

    Update backup-how.page
    Line 31: Replaced "some other" with "another" former seemed dismissive
    Line 45: Replaced "another computer on the network" with "a online cloud service", more people have cloud 
storage. Many people only own one computer.
    Line 54: DVD/CD is mostly obsolete, replaced with "USB Drive"

 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page | 15 ++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index bb6d064a..c80a70e4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -20,10 +20,15 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
-
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+      <email>kleinkravis44 outlook com</email>
+      <years>2020</years>
+    </credit>
+    
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or some other backup application) to make copies of
+    <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or another backup application) to make copies of
     your valuable files and settings to protect against loss.</desc>
   </info>
 
@@ -37,8 +42,8 @@
  your preferences for the backup, as well as how to restore your data.</p>
 
   <p>An alternative option is to <link xref="files-copy">copy your files</link>
- to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, another computer on the
- network, or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link>
+ to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, a online storage service,
+ or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link>
  and settings are usually in your Home folder, so you can copy them from there.</p>
 
   <p>The amount of data you can back up is limited by the size of the storage
@@ -46,7 +51,7 @@
  entire Home folder with the following exceptions:</p>
 
 <list>
- <item><p>Files that are already backed up somewhere else, such as to a CD, DVD,
+ <item><p>Files that are already backed up somewhere else, such as to a USB drive,
  or other removable media.</p></item>
  <item><p>Files that you can recreate easily. For example, if you are a
  programmer, you do not have to back up the files that get produced when you