[gnome-user-docs] Update accounts-remove.page Line 27-31: Add credit Line 41: Replace "wish" with "want", simpler Line



commit 3e7e20b307b44482970b25a5a7a6f293f66b3aad
Author: Klein Kravis <kleinkravis44 outlook com>
Date:   Sat May 23 00:34:18 2020 +0000

    Update accounts-remove.page
    Line 27-31: Add credit
    Line 41: Replace "wish" with "want", simpler
    Line 44: Remove GNOME branding
    Line 48: Remove GNOME Branding

 gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page | 11 ++++++++---
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
index a614ef17..2cf992a2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
@@ -24,6 +24,11 @@
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
       <years>2015</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+      <email>kleinkravis44 outlook com</email>
+      <years>2020</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -33,14 +38,14 @@
 
   <title>Remove an account</title>
 
-  <p>You can remove an online account which you no longer wish to use.</p>
+  <p>You can remove an online account which you no longer want to use.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>Many online services provide an authorization token which GNOME stores
+    <p>Many online services provide an authorization token which your desktop stores
     instead of your password. If you remove an account, you should also revoke
     that certificate in the online service. This will ensure that no other
     application or website can connect to that service using the authorization
-    for GNOME.</p>
+    for your desktop.</p>
 
     <p>How to revoke the authorization depends on the service provider. Check
     your settings on the provider’s website for authorized or connected apps


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