[gimp-web] content: more fixes.

[Jehan <jehanp src gnome org>]

commit 0c52510bf3b9e2795777d389c4696ea0c9f37e4b
Author: Jehan <jehan girinstud io>
Date:   Tue Jul 27 19:34:32 2021 +0200

    content: more fixes.
    
    Thanks to remarks by drc, nomis and patdavid.

 content/news/2021/2021-07_fund-GIMP-developers/index.md | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ This begs the question of sustainability when contributors wish to stay
 longer while not being able to afford being penniless volunteers
 forever.
 
-It has become a growing concern as we have had skilled developers come
-and go for years. Contributing takes a crazy amount of time and people
-have family, work and other responsibilities to take care of. Thus when
-core team contributors are willing to be paid for making Free Software,
-we have decided that GIMP as a project should encourage such endeavours
-by putting more emphasis on their funding.
+We have seen skilled developers come and go for years, the latter
+becoming a growing concern. Contributing takes a crazy amount of time
+and people have family, work and other responsibilities to take care of.
+Thus when core team contributors are willing to be paid for making Free
+Software, we have decided that GIMP as a project should encourage such
+endeavours by putting more emphasis on their funding.
 
 There are currently 2 such crowdfunding projects. **You can consider
 these crowdfundings as "official" as can be and completely endorsed by