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[gnome-user-docs] gnome-help: Update Privacy pages for 3.38 so they are at least not wrong

commit 5568f02b171b5ccd4b4d38335c9824ce05725333
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Sun Nov 22 17:20:18 2020 +0100

    gnome-help: Update Privacy pages for 3.38 so they are at least not wrong

 gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page | 22 ++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page           |  3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page              | 14 ++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page        | 19 ++++++-------------
 4 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
index 6e786850..04b39b78 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.38.1" date="2020-11-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -41,18 +42,15 @@
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Usage &amp; History</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>File History &amp; Trash</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-     <p>Switch the <gui>Recently Used</gui> switch to off.</p>
-     <p>To re-enable this feature, switch the <gui>Recently Used</gui> switch
+     <p>Switch the <gui>File History</gui> switch to off.</p>
+     <p>To re-enable this feature, switch the <gui>File History</gui> switch
      to on.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Use the <gui>Clear Recent History</gui> button to purge the history
+      <p>Use the <gui>Clear History…</gui> button to purge the history
       immediately.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
@@ -70,18 +68,18 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Usage &amp; History</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>File History &amp; Trash</gui> in the sidebar to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-     <p>Ensure the <gui>Recently Used</gui> switch is set to on.</p>
+     <p>Ensure the <gui>File History</gui> switch is set to on.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-     <p>Select the length of time to <gui>Retain History</gui>. Choose from
-     options <gui>1 day</gui>, <gui>7 days</gui>, <gui>30 days</gui>, or
+     <p>Under <gui>File History Duration</gui>, select how long to retain your file history.
+     Choose from options <gui>1 day</gui>, <gui>7 days</gui>, <gui>30 days</gui>, or
      <gui>Forever</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Use the <gui>Clear Recent History</gui> button to purge the history
+      <p>Use the <gui>Clear History…</gui> button to purge the history
       immediately.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page
index 5a2f2dbb..f9f78e9e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-location.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.38.1" date="2020-11-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -34,7 +35,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Location Services</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
      <p>Switch the <gui>Location Services</gui> switch to off.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index fe7db4e0..a3e47e99 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.38.1" date="2020-11-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -51,22 +52,19 @@
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>File History &amp; Trash</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Purge Trash &amp; Temporary Files</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Switch one or both of the <gui>Automatically empty Trash</gui> or
-      <gui>Automatically purge Temporary Files</gui> switches to on.</p>
+      <p>Switch on one or both of <gui>Automatically Delete Trash Content</gui>
+      or <gui>Automatically Delete Temporary Files</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Set how often you would like your <em>Trash</em>  and
       <em>Temporary Files</em> to be purged by changing the
-      <gui>Purge After</gui> value.</p>
+      <gui>Automatically Delete Period</gui> value.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Use the <gui>Empty Trash</gui> or <gui>Purge Temporary Files</gui>
+      <p>Use the <gui>Empty Trash…</gui> or <gui>Delete Temporary Files…</gui>
       buttons to perform these actions immediately.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
index 4a51f190..61e447bb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.33.3" date="2019-07-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.38.1" date="2020-11-22" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -55,14 +56,11 @@
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Screen Lock</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched on, then select
-      a length of time from the drop-down list.</p>
+      <p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched on, then select a
+      length of time from the <gui>Automatic Screen Lock Delay</gui> drop-down list.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -70,13 +68,8 @@
     <p>Applications can present notifications to you that are still displayed
     on your lock screen. This is convenient, for example, to see if you have
     any email without unlocking your screen. If you’re concerned about other
-    people seeing these notifications, switch <gui>Show Notifications</gui>
-    off.</p>
-    <comment>
-      <cite date="2015-09-30">shaunm</cite>
-      <p>TODO: We need docs on the Notifications cc panel to explain the
-      fine-grained controls. When we write that, link here.</p>
-    </comment>
+    people seeing these notifications, switch <gui>Show Notifications on Lock Screen</gui>
+    off. For further notification settings, refer to <link xref="shell-notifications" />.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>When your screen is locked, and you want to unlock it, press
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