[release-notes/gnome-3-28] fix up new sections

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 589884b6f1839a8faaa34f491935d3f961bd335d
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Feb 28 15:33:30 2018 +0000

    fix up new sections

 help/C/index.page |   24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index c079282..95e1741 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -45,6 +45,7 @@
   <section id="personal-organization">
     <title>Personal Organization Improvements</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p>GNOME's applications that help with personal organization have all had improvements for 3.28, to help 
you keep on top. These improvements include:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>In <app>Clocks</app>, it's now possible to add the UTC timezone to your world 
times.</p></item>
       <item><p>The <app>Contacts</app> application now allows sorting by either surname or first name. It 
also has a new shortcuts window and a number of interface improvements.</p></item>
@@ -57,9 +58,8 @@
   <section id="beautiful-things">
     <title>More Beautiful Things</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Cantarell is GNOME's default UI font, and it has had a significant update for 3.28. Character forms 
and spacing have been evolved, so that text that is more readable and attractive. Several new weights have 
also been added - light and extra bold - which are being used to produce interfaces that are both modern and 
beautiful.</p>
-    <p>GNOME's collection of background wallpapers has been updated, to include a new set of beautiful 
photographs.</p>
-    <p>The set of profile pictures that GNOME provides has been completely updated, with attractive new 
images to pick from either initial setup of the user account settings.</p>
+    <p>GNOME 3.28 comes with more beautiful things! First, and most significantly, GNOME's default UI font 
(called Cantarell) has undergone a significant update. Character forms and spacing have been evolved, so that 
text that is more readable and attractive. Several new weights have also been added - light and extra bold - 
which are being used to produce interfaces that are both modern and beautiful.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's collection of background wallpapers have been updated, to include a new set of beautiful 
photographs. Lastly, the set of profile pictures that GNOME provides has been completely updated, with 
attractive new images to pick from either initial setup of the user account settings.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="boxes">
@@ -70,14 +70,14 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="media-and-entertainment">
-    <title>Media and Entertainment Improvements</title>
+    <title>Media and Entertainment Features</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p>Media handling and entertainment have gotten better in GNOME 3.28. Many of these changes are in 
<app>Photos</app>. This has a new import from device feature makes it easy to add photos to your collection 
from removable media. This feature automatically detects devices that contain new images and it also allows 
organizing new images into folders as they're imported. Other improvements in Photos include new editing 
tools for shadows and hightlights, as well as performance improvements.</p>
+    <p>Other media and entertainment improvements include:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p><app>Videos</app> is now able to play MJPEG files.</p></item>
       <item><p>In <app>Music</app>, it's now possible to reorder playlists using drag and drop.</p></item>
       <item><p>In <app>Games</app>, the GNOME application for retro console games, there's a new CRT video 
filter that makes game visuals look like they are being played on an old-fashioned TV. Gamepad rumble will 
now work in many cases.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Photos has a new import from device feature makes it easy to add photos to your collection 
from removable media. This feature automatically detects devices that contain new images and it also allows 
organizing new images into folders as they're imported.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Other improvements in Photos include new editing tools for shadows and hightlights, as well 
as performance improvements.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
@@ -95,15 +95,15 @@
     <p>More Usage features are planned for the future, including the ability to investigate network, power 
and data usage.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="settings-hardware">
-    <title>Settings and Devices</title>
+  <section id="settings-devices">
+    <title>Settings and Device Support</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Hardware and settings improvements:</p>
+    <p>The latest GNOME release comes with enhanced device support, as well as settings improvements. Most 
significantly, GNOME 3.28 comes with integrated <a 
href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thunderbolt_(interface)#Thunderbolt_3">Thunderbolt 3</a> connection 
support. This includes security and privacy checks, designed to prevent data theft through unauthorized 
Thunderbolt 3 connections. Feedback is also shown in the top bar, to indicate when Thunderbolt 3 is active 
and when a connection is being established.</p>
+    <p>Other device and settings improvements include:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>When <app>Settings</app> is launched, it shows the last shown settings panel, which reduces 
the amount of work if you frequently change the same settings.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Touchpads now default to use the "fingers" method for secondary click (typically right click 
on a mouse).</p></item>
+      <item><p>All touchpads now use a gesture for secondary click (the equivalent to right click on a 
mouse) by default. The gesture is simple: keep one finger in contact with the touchpad and tap with another 
finger. The alternative behavior (tapping areas of the touchpad for primary and secondary click) can be 
restored using <app>Tweaks</app> if that is desired.</p></item>
       <item><p>Feedback is now shown for the power level of connected Bluetooth Low Energy (LE) devices. The 
battery level of these devices is now shown in the <gui>Power</gui> settings, and a notification will warn if 
they are running low on power.</p></item>
-      <item><p>GNOME 3.28 comes with integrated <a 
href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thunderbolt_(interface)#Thunderbolt_3">Thunderbolt 3</a> connection 
support. This includes security and privacy checks, designed to prevent data theft through unauthorized 
Thunderbolt 3 connections. Feedback is also shown in the top bar, to indicate when Thunderbolt 3 is active 
and when a connection is being established.</p></item>
+      <item><p>When <app>Settings</app> is launched, it shows the last shown settings panel, which reduces 
the amount of work if you frequently change the same settings.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>