[release-notes/gnome-3-22] incorporate edits from nuritzi sanchez

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 469d6bda452a0902f77d12c5d6d9465263035dfb
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Sep 9 12:14:02 2016 +0100

    incorporate edits from nuritzi sanchez

 help/C/developers.page |   14 ++++++--------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 77c815f..e6eb23a 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
     with new releases being limited to bug and security fixes. These 3.22.x
     updates will be provided for at least three years. Major development work
     will continue in a separate release series, which will be consumable by
-    application authors who are happy to deal with a moderate amount of
-    instability.</p>
+    application authors who want the latest features and are happy to deal with
+    a moderate amount of instability.</p>
     <p>GTK+ 3.22 makes all the improvements introduced in the 3.x series, such
     as CSS styling, GTK+ inspector, animations, new widgets and much more,
     available in a stable form. This new way of organizing GTK+ releases
@@ -78,10 +78,9 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>GNOME 3.22 is another big release for Builder, with several key pieces
     of the new IDE falling into place. A new built-in profiler makes it
-    possible to find performance issues in your project, and sees Builder start
-    to develop into a multi-function IDE for the first time. The profiler
-    currently supports C and C++, with more language support expected in the
-    future.</p>
+    possible to find performance issues in your project, and sees Builder
+    become a multi-function IDE for the first time. The profiler currently
+    supports C and C++, with more language support expected in the future.</p>
     <p>Builder’s UI has received some significant polish since 3.20. A new
     perspective switcher provides a more elegant way to change between modes,
     and the search bar has been relocated. Most significantly, a new “project
@@ -128,8 +127,7 @@
     GdkMonitor</link> is a new more convenient way to get monitor
     information, and provides richer information than was previously
     available with <link
-    href="https://developer.gnome.org/gdk3/unstable/GdkScreen.html";>GdkScreen
-    </link>.</p></item>
+    href="https://developer.gnome.org/gdk3/unstable/GdkScreen.html";>GdkScreen</link>.</p></item>
   </list>
   <p>Additionally, while it is not being introduced in 3.22, major progress
   has been made on the GTK Scene Graph (GSK) over the past six months. With