[release-notes/gnome-3-20] Small comma to period replacement for shorter and clearer sentences
- From: Andreas Nilsson <andreasn src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-20] Small comma to period replacement for shorter and clearer sentences
- Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2016 15:04:43 +0000 (UTC)
commit d3f58a9f48902f941cf0b4b2d951fc72c4dafe9b
Author: Andreas Nilsson <anilsson redhat com>
Date: Wed Mar 16 16:04:13 2016 +0100
Small comma to period replacement for shorter and clearer sentences
help/C/index.page | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 59becbe..4c79cb9 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
<title>Simple and Easy Photo Editing</title>
<media type="image" src="figures/photo-editing.png"/>
<p>With 3.20, editing has arrived in Photos. The new editing controls are
- simple and easy to use, and all editing is non-destructive, so your
+ simple and easy to use. All editing is non-destructive, so your
original photo is preserved and changes can be undone. Editing functions
include crop and rotate, color adjustment and picture enhancement. A
selection of artistic filters are also available.</p>
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