[release-notes/gnome-3-20] Small comma to period replacement for shorter and clearer sentences



commit d3f58a9f48902f941cf0b4b2d951fc72c4dafe9b
Author: Andreas Nilsson <anilsson redhat com>
Date:   Wed Mar 16 16:04:13 2016 +0100

    Small comma to period replacement for shorter and clearer sentences

 help/C/index.page |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 59becbe..4c79cb9 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
     <title>Simple and Easy Photo Editing</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/photo-editing.png"/>
     <p>With 3.20, editing has arrived in Photos. The new editing controls are
-    simple and easy to use, and all editing is non-destructive, so your
+    simple and easy to use. All editing is non-destructive, so your
     original photo is preserved and changes can be undone. Editing functions
     include crop and rotate, color adjustment and picture enhancement. A
     selection of artistic filters are also available.</p>


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