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[gnome-user-docs] Update user-* pages

commit 4d459b24eeccc99a775b3f2e9d4a2033f2c9b34a
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 14:59:18 2015 -0400

    Update user-* pages

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page                 |   25 +++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page        |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page       |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page      |   11 +++--
 gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page           |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page      |   59 +++------------------------
 gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page       |   10 ++--
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page              |    7 ++-
 gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page        |    3 +-
 system-admin-guide/C/login-enterprise.page |    3 +-
 10 files changed, 47 insertions(+), 78 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 8090c53..b584c4c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -10,22 +10,23 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
+      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
-      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -61,8 +62,8 @@
     <item>
       <p>If you want the new user to have
       <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrative access</link> to the
-      computer, select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type.
-      Administrators can do things like add and delete users, install software
+      computer, select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type.</p>
+      <p>Administrators can do things like add and delete users, install software
       and drivers, and change the date and time.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -72,10 +73,12 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>You can choose to set a password for the new user, or let them set it
-      themselves on their first login. You can press on the
-      <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">generate
-      password</span></media></gui> icon to automatically generate a random
-      password.</p>
+      themselves on their first login.</p>
+      <p>If you choose to set the password now,
+      you can press the <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image"
+      src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16">
+      <span its:translate="yes">generate password</span></media></gui> icon to
+      automatically generate a random password.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Add</gui>.</p>
@@ -83,7 +86,7 @@
   </steps>
 
   <p>If you want to change the password after creating the account, select the
-  account, <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> the panel and press on the current
+  account, <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> the panel and press the current
   password status.</p>
 
   <note>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index d9dc169..84c6c36 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
index f04ecf0..e4fba3d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
index f8527e0..e3c74bf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
@@ -5,10 +5,13 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#privileges"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-change"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -33,15 +36,15 @@
 
   <list>
     <item>
-      <p>Connecting to networks or wireless networks</p>
+      <p>connecting to networks or wireless networks,</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Viewing the contents of a removable disk connected to the computer, or
+      <p>viewing the contents of a removable disk connected to the computer, or
       the contents of a different disk partition (for example, a Windows
-      partition)</p>
+      partition), or</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Installing new applications</p>
+      <p>installing new applications.</p>
     </item>
   </list>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
index 1828770..f847b2f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-04-04" status="review" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review" />
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -32,7 +33,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the user account that you want to log in to automatically at
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 9dffc75..79bcb30 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -6,10 +6,12 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-goodpassword"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -69,7 +71,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click the label <gui>·····</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. If you
@@ -79,10 +81,10 @@
     <item>
       <p>Enter your current password, then a new password. Enter your new
       password again in the <gui>Verify New Password</gui> field.</p>
-      <p>You can press on the
-      <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">generate
-      password</span></media></gui> icon to automatically generate a random
-      password.</p>
+      <p>You can press the <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no"
+      type="image" src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16">
+      <span its:translate="yes">generate password</span></media></gui> icon to
+      automatically generate a random password.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p>
@@ -100,51 +102,4 @@
   <p>If you forget your password, any user with administrator privileges can
   change it for you.</p>
 
-<!-- The login keyring password is updated automatically nowadays.
-<section id="changepass">
-  <title>Change the keyring password</title>
-
-  <p>If you change your login password, it may become out of sync with the
-  <em>keyring password</em>. The keyring keeps you from having to remember lots
-  of different passwords by just requiring one <em>master</em> password to
-  access them all. If you change your user password (see above), your keyring
-  password will remain the same as your old password. <!- - When you next log
-  in, you will be asked to update your keyring password. If you prefer to
-  change the keyring password (to match your login password) immediately: - ->
-  To change the keyring password (to match your login password):</p>
-
-  <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Open the <app>Passwords and Keys</app> application from the
-      <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>In the <gui>View</gui> menu, ensure <gui>By keyring</gui> is checked,
-      and select <gui>Show any</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>In the sidebar under <gui>Passwords</gui>, right-click on <gui>Login
-      keyring</gui> and select <gui>Change Password</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Enter your old password and click <gui>Continue</gui>. Enter your new
-      password and <gui>Type again</gui> to confirm it.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Continue</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
-
-  <note style="info package">
-    <p>You must have the <sys>seahorse</sys> package installed to use
-    <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
-    <if:choose xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";>
-      <if:when test="action:install">
-        <p><link action="install:seahorse" style="button">Install seahorse</link></p>
-      </if:when>
-    </if:choose>
-  </note>
-
-</section>-->
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index 8ae7fea..15323e4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -5,10 +5,12 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14.0" date="2014-10-08" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -44,7 +46,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you want to edit a user other than yourself, press
@@ -62,12 +64,10 @@
         </item>
         <item>
           <p>If you have a webcam, you can take a new login photo right now by
-          clicking <gui style="button" its:translate="no"><media type="image"
-          src="figures/camera-photo-symbolic.svg"><span
-          its:translate="yes">camera icon</span></media></gui>. Take your
+          clicking <gui>Take a photo…</gui>. Take your
           picture, then move and resize the square outline to crop out the
           parts you do not want. If you do not like the picture you took, click
-          <gui style="button">Take another picture</gui> to try again, or
+          <gui style="button">Take Another Picture</gui> to try again, or
           <gui>Cancel</gui> to give up.</p>
         </item>
       </list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index f62669a..326d9ce 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -5,10 +5,13 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="user-add"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -51,7 +54,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
@@ -67,7 +70,7 @@
       can choose to keep or delete the user's home folder. Click <gui>Delete
       Files</gui> if you are sure they will not be used anymore and you need to
       free up disk space. These files are permanently deleted. They cannot be
-      recovered. You may want to back up the files to an external drive or CD
+      recovered. You may want to back up the files to an external storage device
       before deleting them.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
index 385cba0..cd3d1b7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -68,7 +69,7 @@
     <item>
       <p>Do not use any words that appear in a standard dictionary in any
       language. Password crackers will try these first. The most common
-      password is "password" -- people can guess passwords like this very
+      password is "password" – people can guess passwords like this very
       quickly!</p>
     </item>
     <item>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/login-enterprise.page b/system-admin-guide/C/login-enterprise.page
index 513b43b..8178e8f 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/login-enterprise.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/login-enterprise.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="login#management" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-01-28" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Petr Kovar</name>
@@ -43,7 +44,7 @@
     <title>Configure enterprise credentials</title>
       <item>
         <p>At the <gui>Login</gui> welcome screen, choose
-          <gui>Use Enterprise Login</gui>.</p>
+          <gui>Set Up Enterprise Login</gui>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Type the name of your domain in the <gui>Domain</gui> field
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