[release-notes/gnome-3-18] more minor fixes

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 0c5e5263855d60031bfb12d0d2580bba9e7cf125
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 16 11:36:14 2015 +0100

    more minor fixes

 help/C/more.page |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 76fd751..8a26fff 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
   <title>Other Features in GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes many other new features and improvements:</p>
+  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes many other new features and improvements, including improvements to Boxes 
and Polari, and enhancements for touchpad and touchscreen users. Read on to find out more!</p>
 
   <section id="touchpad-gestures">
     <title>Multitouch Touchpad Gestures</title>
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
     <title>Refined Scrolling</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Scrolling has been a particular focus for &gnomeversion;. If kinetic scrolling (where scroll movement 
has inertia and feels physical) has not worked with your touchpad recently, this issue has now been resolved 
(thanks to kinetic scrolling now being handled by GTK+ itself).</p>
-    <p>A new auto-scroll feature has also been added, which gradually scrolls the view in one direction. To 
activate this, press the scrollbar trough with the secondary mouse or touchpad button (this is the right 
button by default). This change has required that other scroll actions have been reorganized: to scroll by 
one page at a time, hold <key>Shift</key> and click with the primary button.</p>
+    <p>A new auto-scroll feature has also been added, which gradually scrolls the view in one direction. To 
activate this, press the scroll bar with the secondary mouse or touchpad button (this is the right button by 
default). This change has required that other scroll actions have been reorganized: to scroll by one page at 
a time, hold <key>Shift</key> and click with the primary button.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="To Do">
@@ -80,16 +80,16 @@
     <list>
       <item><p>The system status menu (located in the top right corner of the screen) has been refined. With 
a simpler organization, it is now smaller and easier to read.</p></item>
       <item><p>Web, the GNOME browser, has got faster. The quality of displayed images has also 
improved.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Bluetooth sharing has been merged into the main Bluetooth settings, so it is easier to find. 
Various other improvements have been made to the Bluetooth settings, including handling airplane mode better, 
and giving better feedback when no Bluetooth devices are available.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The layout of the Logs application has been improved, so that it is more efficient and easier 
to read. It is also possible to select which boot to view.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Bluetooth sharing has been merged into the main Bluetooth settings, so it is easier to find. 
Various other improvements have also been made to the Bluetooth settings, including handling airplane mode 
better, and giving better feedback when no Bluetooth devices are available.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The layout of the Logs application has been improved, so that it is more efficient and easier 
to read. It is also possible to select which boot to view logs from.</p></item>
       <item><p>The screen will no longer automatically lock when you are watching a fullscreen video in 
Web.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The animation on progress spinners has been made super smooth.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The collections dialog has been greatly improved in Documents, with a better layout and 
easier collection renaming and deletion.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The animation of progress spinners has been made super smooth.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The collections dialog has been greatly improved in Documents, with a better layout and 
easier renaming and deletion.</p></item>
       <item><p>Evince, the document viewer, can now display inline multimedia, such as video and 
audio.</p></item>
       <item><p>In Evince, the interface for annotations has also been much improved. Annotations can now 
also be moved, and highlight annotations have been introduced.</p></item>
       <item><p>System modal dialogs have been restyled, so that they match the other dialog windows in 
GNOME.</p></item>
       <item><p>Web’s built-in PDF viewer now has a search function.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Maps now is now able to indicate your direction as well as location. It is also possible to 
enter latitude/longitude coordinates or a geoURI.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Maps is now able to indicate your direction as well as location. It is also possible to enter 
latitude/longitude coordinates or a geoURI.</p></item>
       <item><p>And, as usual, the new release includes lots of bug fixes!</p></item>
     </list>