[release-notes/gnome-3-18] more minor fixes to the more page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 86562be542da96f7ec926049095d02afd03decfc
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 16 11:26:16 2015 +0100

    more minor fixes to the more page

 help/C/more.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 876a087..76fd751 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -48,9 +48,9 @@
     <list>
       <item><p>A new list view shows more details about each of your boxes, and is helpful when you have a 
lot of boxes. It is particularly suited to working with servers.</p></item>
       <item><p>It is now possible to filter the main view in order to only show remote or local 
boxes.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The IP address of boxes is now shown beneath their thumbnail: this is useful for accessing 
them from the command line, or for differentiating between lots of boxes.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Express installation is now available for Fedora 21 and newer.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Force shutdown and restart actions are now easier to access.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The IP address of boxes is now shown beneath their thumbnail: this is useful for accessing 
them from the command line. In some cases, it is also useful for differentiating between lots of 
boxes.</p></item>
+      <item><p>It is now possible to do express installs with Fedora 21 and newer.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The force shutdown and restart actions are now easier to access.</p></item>
       <item><p>A new option makes it possible to force a box to keep running, even when it is not in use. 
This is particularly useful if the box is a server.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
@@ -65,13 +65,13 @@
     <title>Refined Scrolling</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Scrolling has been a particular focus for &gnomeversion;. If kinetic scrolling (where scroll movement 
has inertia and feels physical) has not worked with your touchpad recently, this issue has now been resolved 
(thanks to kinetic scrolling now being handled by GTK+ itself).</p>
-    <p>A new auto-scroll feature has also been added, which gradually scrolls the view in one direction. To 
activate this, press the scrollbar trough with the secondary mouse or touchpad button (this is the right 
button by default). This change has required that other scroll actions have been reorganized. To scrolling by 
one page at a time, hold <key>Shift</key> and click with the primary button.</p>
+    <p>A new auto-scroll feature has also been added, which gradually scrolls the view in one direction. To 
activate this, press the scrollbar trough with the secondary mouse or touchpad button (this is the right 
button by default). This change has required that other scroll actions have been reorganized: to scroll by 
one page at a time, hold <key>Shift</key> and click with the primary button.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="To Do">
     <title>To Do</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>To Do is a new application that is being released as a technical preview in GNOME &gnomeversion;. It 
is a simple personal task manager: Tasks can be scheduled, and the <gui>Today</gui> view shows what you 
should be doing next. It is also possible to group tasks, give them color codes, and notes and priorities. 
These can be organized into lists that can be color coded.</p>
+    <p>To Do is a new application that is being released as a technical preview in GNOME &gnomeversion;. It 
is a simple personal task manager: tasks can be entered, grouped, color-coded, prioritized, and have notes 
attached to them. You can also schedule tasks, and the <gui>Today</gui> view gives an overview of what you 
should be doing next.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">