[release-notes/gnome-3-18] Some minor fixes



commit b71da6a7b88e6ada04d731b9a40af7408ef17597
Author: Piotr Drąg <piotrdrag gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 00:28:26 2015 +0200

    Some minor fixes

 help/C/developers.page |   28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 help/C/i18n.page       |    9 ++++++---
 help/C/index.page      |   20 ++++++++++----------
 help/C/more.page       |   18 +++++++++---------
 4 files changed, 39 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 0c2d34f..8d6ec65 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     </license>
   </info>
 
-  <title>What's new for developers, system administrators and distributors</title>
+  <title>What’s new for developers, system administrators and distributors</title>
 
   <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; introduces a number of new features and enhancements for those working with GNOME 
technologies.</p>
 
@@ -29,10 +29,10 @@
     <title>Builder</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Builder is the new integrated development environment for GNOME, which aims to make it quick and easy 
to do all kinds of development work, particularly application development. Thanks to a successful 
crowdfunding campaign, a huge amount of progress has been made since last release. While it is still under 
heavy development, Builder is already becoming an extremely effective tool.</p>
-    <p>New features since 3.16 include:</p>
+    <p>New features since &lastversion; include:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>A new workspace system, which allows different panels to be visible, including: a project 
file tree, a list of build targets, a searchable index of available documentation, a symbols list for the 
current file, and a terminal.</p></item>
-      <item><p>A popup command prompt.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A pop-up command prompt.</p></item>
       <item><p>Autocompletion for Python using Jedi.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improved syntax highlighting and automatic completion.</p></item>
       <item><p>An overview page for available keyboard shortcuts and touchpad gestures.</p></item>
@@ -42,33 +42,33 @@
 
   <section id="xdg-app">
     <title>Sandboxed Applications</title>
-    <p>GNOME's new application sandboxing project aims to enable the creation of secure isolated 
applications, that can be installed on multiple distributions. Major progress on this technology has been 
made during the 3.18 cycle.</p>
-    <p>Xdg-App is the tool which allows runtimes and applications to be installed. This is now an official 
freedesktop project, with releases in several distributions. Additionally, official GNOME runtime and SDK 
builds are available at <link href="http://sdk.gnome.org/";>sdk.gnome.org</link>. These can be used to build 
and host your applications.</p>
+    <p>GNOME’s new application sandboxing project aims to enable the creation of secure isolated 
applications, that can be installed on multiple distributions. Major progress on this technology has been 
made during the &gnomeversion; cycle.</p>
+    <p>XDG-App is the tool which allows runtimes and applications to be installed. This is now an official 
freedesktop.org project, with releases in several distributions. Additionally, official GNOME runtime and SDK 
builds are available at <link href="http://sdk.gnome.org/";>sdk.gnome.org</link>. These can be used to build 
and host your applications.</p>
     <p>More information can be found on the <link 
href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/SandboxedApps";>application sandboxing wiki page</link>.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="gtk+">
     <title>GTK+</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GTK+ has various improvements in 3.18:</p>
+    <p>GTK+ has various improvements in &gnomeversion;:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>A new tool called <code>gtk-builder-tool</code> allows GtkBuilder UI files to be validated 
and simplified.</p></item>
-      <item><p>3.18 includes a raft of new typographic features: including colored underlines, 
letterspacing, font features and translucent font colors. It also includes support for custom font maps and 
font options.</p></item>
+      <item><p>&gnomeversion; includes a raft of new typographic features: including colored underlines, 
letterspacing, font features and translucent font colors. It also includes support for custom font maps and 
font options.</p></item>
       <item><p>Output-only windows are now supported, using the <code>GtkOverlay::pass-through</code> 
property. This allows input to be directed to the correct window, and is useful when using floating 
information or decorative overlays.</p></item>
-      <item><p><code>GtkGesture</code> now has builtin support for touchpad gestures (only available on 
Wayland).</p></item>
+      <item><p><code>GtkGesture</code> now has built-in support for touchpad gestures (only available on 
Wayland).</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="hig">
     <title>Human Interface Guidelines</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's Human Interface Guidelines have received a major update for 3.18. Structure and navigation 
has been improved, to make it quicker and easier to use. The guidelines have also been updated and expanded: 
new patterns have been added on in-app notifications, info bars, OSD controls and empty placeholders.</p>
+    <p>GNOME’s Human Interface Guidelines have received a major update for &gnomeversion;. Structure and 
navigation has been improved, to make it quicker and easier to use. The guidelines have also been updated and 
expanded: new patterns have been added on in-app notifications, info bars, OSD controls and empty 
placeholders.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="glib">
     <title>GLib</title>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Threadpools no longer limited to 10 threeds.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Threadpools no longer limited to 10 threads.</p></item>
       <item><p>Information about metered networks available in GNetworkMonitor.</p></item>
       <item><p>Portability improvements: GNotification implemented on OS X and GAppInfo registry-based 
implementation on Windows.</p></item>
     </list>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
   <section id="clutter">
     <title>Clutter</title>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Prefer OpenGL 3.x contexts, if available, and fall back to the old legacy GL API if 
not.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Prefer OpenGL 3.x contexts, if available, and fall back to the old legacy OpenGL API if 
not.</p></item>
       <item><p>Support touchpad gesture events with the libinput backend; this can be used by Clutter-based 
Wayland compositors, like GNOME Shell.</p></item>
       <item><p>Allow binding GListModel implementations to ClutterActor instances, to automatically create 
actors from objects stored inside models.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improvements all around with regards to input on X11, Wayland, and GDK.</p></item>
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@
     <list>
       <item><p>gedit has a minimap.</p></item>
       <item><p>A new gedit plugins allows finding text in all files.</p></item>
-      <item><p>gitg improvements - initial state, ...</p></item>
-      <item><p>Web has a new web inspector UI, which includes new features</p></item>
-      <item><p>New API for UI and Web extensions</p></item>
+      <item><p>gitg improvements — initial state, …</p></item>
+      <item><p>Web has a new Web Inspector UI, which includes new features.</p></item>
+      <item><p>New API for UI and Web extensions.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/i18n.page b/help/C/i18n.page
index 0e9117d..1e96f39 100644
--- a/help/C/i18n.page
+++ b/help/C/i18n.page
@@ -1,5 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
        <!DOCTYPE page [
+<!ENTITY gnomeversion "3.18">
+<!ENTITY lastversion "3.16">
+<!ENTITY nextversion "3.20">
 <!ENTITY supportedlanguages "41">
 <!ENTITY percentagetranslated "80">
        ]>
@@ -11,7 +14,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#more" group="second"/>
-    <desc>Learn about the different languages in which GNOME 3.16 is available</desc>
+    <desc>Learn about the different languages in which GNOME &gnomeversion; is available</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Allan Day</name>
       <email its:translate="no">allanday gnome org</email>
@@ -23,7 +26,7 @@
 
   <title>Internationalization</title>
 
-  <p>Thanks to members of the worldwide <link href="https://wiki.gnome.org/TranslationProject";>GNOME 
Translation Project</link>, GNOME 3.18 offers support for more than &supportedlanguages; languages with at 
least &percentagetranslated; percent of strings translated. User documentation is also available in many 
languages.</p>
+  <p>Thanks to members of the worldwide <link href="https://wiki.gnome.org/TranslationProject";>GNOME 
Translation Project</link>, GNOME &gnomeversion; offers support for more than &supportedlanguages; languages 
with at least &percentagetranslated; percent of strings translated. User documentation is also available in 
many languages.</p>
 
   <list style="compact">
    <item><p>Arabic</p></item>
@@ -87,6 +90,6 @@
 
   <p>Numerous other languages are partially supported, with more than half of their strings translated.</p>
 
-  <p>Detailed statistics and more information are all available on GNOME's <link 
href="https://l10n.gnome.org/";>translation status site</link>. You can also find out how to <link 
href="https://live.gnome.org/TranslationProject/ContributeTranslations";>help translate GNOME</link>.</p>
+  <p>Detailed statistics and more information are all available on GNOME’s <link 
href="https://l10n.gnome.org/";>translation status site</link>. You can also find out how to <link 
href="https://live.gnome.org/TranslationProject/ContributeTranslations";>help translate GNOME</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 25125d0..dbe0d35 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -26,15 +26,15 @@
 
   <title>Introducing GNOME &gnomeversion;, “Gothenburg”</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; is the latest version of GNOME 3, and is the result of 6 months' hard work by the 
GNOME community. It contains major new features, as well as numerous smaller improvements and bug fixes. The 
release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors; contributors.</p>
+  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; is the latest version of GNOME 3, and is the result of 6 months’ hard work by the 
GNOME community. It contains major new features, as well as numerous smaller improvements and bug fixes. The 
release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors; contributors.</p>
 
-<p>&gnomeversion; is code-named “Gothenburg” in recognition of this year's GUADEC host city. In future, each 
GNOME release will be named in this way.</p>
+<p>&gnomeversion; is code-named “Gothenburg” in recognition of this year’s GUADEC host city. In future, each 
GNOME release will be named in this way.</p>
 
   <section id="google-drive">
     <title>Google Drive Integration</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>With GNOME &gnomeversion;, it is now possible to access Google Drive directly from the Files 
application, as well as from file chooser dialogs. To use the feature, simply add your Google through the 
Online Accounts settings, and Google Drive will automatically appear in the files places sidebar whenever you 
are.</p>
-    <p>File upload and folder creation are both supported. Recognised files are opened using your local, 
native applications. Files that are specific to Google Drive are opened using the browser.</p>
+    <p>File upload and folder creation are both supported. Recognized files are opened using your local, 
native applications. Files that are specific to Google Drive are opened using the browser.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="files-improvements">
@@ -43,13 +43,13 @@
     <p>&gnomeversion; includes numerous improvements to the files experience. A new location has been added 
to the files places sidebar, called <gui>Other Locations</gui>. This provides a useful overview of local 
volumes, as well as network locations. These locations are no longer add to the sidebar by default, which 
helps to avoid clutter. The places sidebar has also been updated to make it easier to add bookmarks by drag 
and drop.</p>
     <p>Other changes include:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Dialogs for creating folders have been introduced, alongised popovers for renaming files and 
folders. This helps to avoid errors, and allows helpful feedback to be provided. This change was introduced 
following user testing results.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Dialogs for creating folders have been introduced, alongside popovers for renaming files and 
folders. This helps to avoid errors, and allows helpful feedback to be provided. This change was introduced 
following user testing results.</p></item>
       <item><p>Recursive search is now automatically disabled when searching remote locations, in order to 
prevent performance problems.</p></item>
       <item><p>Better feedback when no search results are found.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Feedback about ongoing operations has been streamlined, with a new indicator in the header 
bar. This allows you to easily see progress on ongoing operations from any Files window, and means that popup 
windows won't get in the way.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Feedback about ongoing operations has been streamlined, with a new indicator in the header 
bar. This allows you to easily see progress on ongoing operations from any Files window, and means that 
pop-up windows won’t get in the way.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improved touch screen compatibility, particularly through context menus.</p></item>
     </list>
-    <p>Many of these changes can be found in file chooser dialogs, as well as Files. At the same time, yile 
choosers have received their own improvements:</p>
+    <p>Many of these changes can be found in file chooser dialogs, as well as Files. At the same time, file 
choosers have received their own improvements:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>A new search feature, which is activated by just typing and is consistent with other GNOME 
applications.</p></item>
       <item><p>An improved recent files list, which now shows the location of each file.</p></item>
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
   <section id="firmware-updates">
     <title>Firmware Update Capability</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>In the past, it has been difficult to update device software (such as BIOS) under GNOME. This has now 
changed, with the new <link href="https://beta-lvfs.rhcloud.com/";>Linux Vendor Firmware Service</link>, which 
aims to make it possible for hardwark manufacturers to distribute firmware updates.</p>
+    <p>In the past, it has been difficult to update device software (such as BIOS) under GNOME. This has now 
changed, with the new <link href="https://beta-lvfs.rhcloud.com/";>Linux Vendor Firmware Service</link>, which 
aims to make it possible for hardware manufacturers to distribute firmware updates.</p>
     <p>With &gnomeversion;, Software has built-in support for the Linux Vendor Firmware Service, which will 
enable you to easily install firmware updates for you device, in the same way that you install other software 
updates.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -84,14 +84,14 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">
-    <title>And that's not all</title>
-    <p>There's much more to GNOME &gnomeversion;. Read on to find out…</p>
+    <title>And that’s not all</title>
+    <p>There’s much more to GNOME &gnomeversion;. Read on to find out…</p>
     <links type="topic" groups="first second third"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="getting-gnome">
     <title>Getting GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
-    <p>GNOME's software is <link href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free Software</link>: all 
<link href="http://git.gnome.org/";>our code</link> is available for download and can be freely modified and 
redistributed. To install it, we recommend that you wait for the official packages provided by your vendor or 
distribution. Popular distributions will make GNOME &gnomeversion; available very soon, and some already have 
development versions that include the new GNOME release.</p>
+    <p>GNOME’s software is <link href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html";>Free Software</link>: all 
<link href="http://git.gnome.org/";>our code</link> is available for download and can be freely modified and 
redistributed. To install it, we recommend that you wait for the official packages provided by your vendor or 
distribution. Popular distributions will make GNOME &gnomeversion; available very soon, and some already have 
development versions that include the new GNOME release.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="about">
diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 6e0f131..cdff114 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -36,20 +36,20 @@
   <section id="touch-screen-improvements">
     <title>Touch Screen Improvements</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The ability to select, cut, copy and paste text using a touchscreen has been dramatically improved in 
&gnomeversion;. The handles used to adjust text selections have been made bigger and their look has been 
improved. New popovers provide convenient access to actions, like cut, copy and paste. Behaviour has been 
improved, too: now, a single tap selects a word, and a second tap shows the actions popover.</p>
+    <p>The ability to select, cut, copy and paste text using a touchscreen has been dramatically improved in 
&gnomeversion;. The handles used to adjust text selections have been made bigger and their look has been 
improved. New popovers provide convenient access to actions, like cut, copy and paste. Behavior has been 
improved, too: now, a single tap selects a word, and a second tap shows the actions popover.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="polari">
     <title>A Better Polari</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Polari, GNOME's IRC application, has had a number of refinements for &gnomeversion;. Paste service 
integration has been added, so that it is easy to share large blocks of text. Simply paste the text you want 
to share into the chat entry box, and Polari will paste it online and send a link to the channel.</p>
+    <p>Polari, GNOME’s IRC application, has had a number of refinements for &gnomeversion;. Paste service 
integration has been added, so that it is easy to share large blocks of text. Simply paste the text you want 
to share into the chat entry box, and Polari will paste it online and send a link to the channel.</p>
     <p>Other improvements include a better first run experience, which now guides users through the process 
of creating connections, improved feedback for connection errors, as well as many bug fixes and visual 
enhancements.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="scrolling">
     <title>Refined Scrolling</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Scrolling has been a particular area of work in 3.18. If kinetic scrolling (where scroll movement has 
inertia, and feels physical) has not worked with your touchpad recently, this has now been resolved (thanks 
to kinetic scrolling now being handled by GTK+ itself).</p>
+    <p>Scrolling has been a particular area of work in &gnomeversion;. If kinetic scrolling (where scroll 
movement has inertia, and feels physical) has not worked with your touchpad recently, this has now been 
resolved (thanks to kinetic scrolling now being handled by GTK+ itself).</p>
     <p>Controls for scrollbars have also been updated for &gnomeversion;:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>Clicking the scrollbar with the primary button (this is the left button by default) jumps to 
that location.</p></item>
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
   <section id="boxes">
     <title>More Powerful Boxes</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Boxes is the GNOME application for using virtual and remote machines. For 3.18, it has been made more 
powerful.</p>
+    <p>Boxes is the GNOME application for using virtual and remote machines. For &gnomeversion;, it has been 
made more powerful.</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>A new list view lets you get an overview when you have a lot of boxes, and is particularly 
suited to working with servers.</p></item>
       <item><p>It is now possible to filter the main view of boxes, to only show either remote or 
local.</p></item>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
   <section id="preview-apps">
     <title>Preview Applications</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>To Do and News are two new applications that are being released for the first time in 3.18, as 
technical previews. To Do is a simple personal task manager. Tasks can be scheduled, and the <gui>Today</gui> 
view shows what you should be doing next. It is also possible to group tasks, give them color codes, and 
notes and priorities. helps you keep organized, . These can be organised into lists that can be color 
coded.</p>
+    <p>To Do and News are two new applications that are being released for the first time in &gnomeversion;, 
as technical previews. To Do is a simple personal task manager. Tasks can be scheduled, and the 
<gui>Today</gui> view shows what you should be doing next. It is also possible to group tasks, give them 
color codes, and notes and priorities. helps you keep organized, . These can be organized into lists that can 
be color coded.</p>
     <p>News is a feed reader, designed to be consistent with GNOME 3 applications, and to provide a 
clutter-free reading experience.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -84,11 +84,11 @@
     <list>
       <item><p>GNOME Shell refinements (improved system status menu, restyled dialog windows).</p></item>
       <item><p>Logs improvements (better layout, select which boot to view).</p></item>
-      <item><p>Control center - improved bluetooth settings.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Control center — improved Bluetooth settings.</p></item>
       <item><p>Smooth spinners.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Documents - improved collections dialog</p></item>
-      <item><p>Evince - improved annotations in Evince, including the introduction of highlight annotations, 
an improved interface, and the ability to move annotations.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Web's PDF viewer now allows search.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Documents — improved collections dialog.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Evince — improved annotations in Evince, including the introduction of highlight annotations, 
an improved interface, and the ability to move annotations.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Web’s PDF viewer now allows search.</p></item>
       <item><p>The screen will not automatically lock when watching fullscreen videos with Web.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improved performance in Web.</p></item>
       <item><p>Maps now is now able to indicate your direction as well as location, and it is possible to 
enter latitude/longitude coordinates or a geoURI.</p></item>


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