[release-notes/gnome-3-16] tighten up the gtk+ paragraph

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit f242bbc2879f74fd3116c17d26509cf25770f3ca
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 18 12:23:49 2015 +0000

    tighten up the gtk+ paragraph

 help/C/developers.page |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 475505d..721e593 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@
   <section id="gtk+">
     <title>GTK+</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>With &gnomeversion;, <link href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OpenGL";>OpenGL</link> support has 
landed in GTK+. This allows OpenGL to draw content in GTK+ applications, using the new <code>GtkGLArea</code> 
widget, and means that applications and games that make heavy use of 3D graphics can be written in 
conjunction with GTK+. OpenGL support in GTK+ &gnomeversion; provides an effective replacement for the 
previous GtkGLArea and GtkGLExt libraries. It is also an important step in the development of the GTK+ Scene 
Graph.</p>
+    <p>With &gnomeversion;, built-in <link href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OpenGL";>OpenGL</link> support 
has arrived for GTK+. This allows applications that make heavy use of 3D graphics to be written in 
conjunction with GTK+, using the new <code>GtkGLArea</code> widget. OpenGL support in GTK+ &gnomeversion; 
provides an effective replacement for the previous GtkGLArea and GtkGLExt libraries.</p>
 
-   <p>Other changes in this version of GTK+ includes:</p>
+   <p>Other changes in this version of GTK+ include:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>A display system backend for the Mir display server.</p></item>
       <item><p><code>GtkPopoverMenu</code>, a new widget for creating menus contained with 
popovers.</p></item>