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[release-notes/gnome-3-16] final edits

commit b00b123ad943f766cfce81c07ef0b9981a335832
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 13 16:40:11 2015 +0000

    final edits

 help/C/developers.page |   55 +++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
 help/C/index.page      |   26 +++++++++++-----------
 help/C/more.page       |   44 +++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 3 files changed, 64 insertions(+), 61 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index b95cc48..1c94dbc 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -28,16 +28,14 @@
   <section id="gtk+">
     <title>GTK+</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>With &gnomeversion;, <link href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OpenGL";>OpenGL</link> support has 
landed in <app>GTK+</app>. This allows OpenGL to draw content in GTK+ applications, using the new 
<code>GtkGLArea</code> widget, and means that heavily 3D-based applications and games can be written in 
conjunction with <app>GTK+</app>.</p>
+    <p>With &gnomeversion;, <link href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OpenGL";>OpenGL</link> support has 
landed in GTK+. This allows OpenGL to draw content in GTK+ applications, using the new <code>GtkGLArea</code> 
widget, and means that applications and games that make heavy use of 3D graphics can be written in 
conjunction with GTK+. OpenGL support in GTK+ &gnomeversion; provides an effective replacement for the 
previous GtkGLArea and GtkGLExt libraries. It is also an important step in the development of the GTK+ Scene 
Graph.</p>
 
-    <p>OpenGL support in GTK+ &gnomeversion; provides an effective replacement for the previous 
<app>GtkGLArea</app> and <app>GtkGLExt</app> libraries. It is also an important step in the development of 
the GTK+ Scene Graph.</p>
-
-   <p>Other changes in this version of <app>GTK+</app> includes:</p>
+   <p>Other changes in this version of GTK+ includes:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>A display system backend for <app>Mir</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A display system backend for the Mir display server.</p></item>
       <item><p><code>GtkPopoverMenu</code>, a new widget for creating menus contained with 
popovers.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Themes can now simultaneously support multiple <app>GTK+</app> versions, by including 
version-specific CSS.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Improved support for application menus on <app>OS X</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Themes can now simultaneously support multiple GTK+ versions, by including version-specific 
CSS.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Improved support for application menus on OS X.</p></item>
       <item><p>Customizable selection behavior in <code>GtkTextView</code>.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
@@ -45,19 +43,25 @@
   <section id="gtk-inspector">
     <title>GTK+ Inspector</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>GTK+</app>'s live inspector has had lots of improvements for &gnomeversion;. New features 
include an interactive JavaScript prompt, memory tracking, and a magnifier for inspecting widgets (this is 
particularly useful for theme writers).</p>
-    <p>Other improvements include increased isolation of the inspector, so that settings changes only affect 
the application you are inspecting, and a much improved user interface.</p>
+    <p>GTK+'s live inspector has had lots of improvements for &gnomeversion;. New features include:</p>
+    <list>
+      <item><p>An interactive JavaScript prompt.</p></item>
+      <item><p>An interface for GLib's new memory tracking features.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A magnifier for inspecting widgets (this is particularly useful for theme authors).</p></item>
+      <item><p>Increased isolation of the inspector through the use of a separate display connection. This 
means that settings changes only affect the application you are inspecting, and not the inspector 
itself.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A much improved user interface, which uses space more efficiently and is easier to 
navigate.</p></item>
+    </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="glib">
-    <title>glib</title>
-    <p>The latest <app>GLib</app> release includes a number of new features.</p>
+    <title>GLib</title>
+    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; is accompanied by GLib 2.44. This latest GLib release includes a number of new 
features:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>GObject instance counting is a new debugging feature, which helps to find reference leaks. To 
use this facility, set the <code>GOBJECT_DEBUG=instance-count</code> environment variable, and then use 
<code>g_type_get_instance_count()</code> to get the number of live objects of a given type. <app>GTK 
Inspector</app> has a UI for this.</p></item>
-      <item><p>By making use of <app>NetworkManager</app>, <app>GLib</app>'s network monitor implementation 
has been improved. This can be accessed using the existing <code>GNetworkMonitor</code> interface, to find 
out the current network state.</p></item>
-      <item><p>&gnomeversion; introduces <code>GListModel</code>, a GSequence-based object list. This 
provides an alternative to <code>GtkTreeModel</code>, when data is naturally organized in GObjects. 
<code>GtkListBox</code> has an API (<code>gtk_list_box_bind_model</code>) to use such models.</p></item>
+      <item><p>GObject instance counting is a new debugging feature which helps to find reference leaks. To 
use it, set the <code>GOBJECT_DEBUG=instance-count</code> environment variable, and then use 
<code>g_type_get_instance_count()</code> to get the number of live objects of a given type. GTK+ Inspector 
has a UI for this.</p></item>
+      <item><p>GLib 2.44 introduces <code>GListModel</code>, a GSequence-based object list. This provides an 
alternative to <code>GtkTreeModel</code>, when data is naturally organized in GObjects. 
<code>GtkListBox</code> has an API (<code>gtk_list_box_bind_model</code>) to use such models.</p></item>
+      <item><p>GLib's network monitor implementation has been significantly improved. This can be accessed 
using the existing <code>GNetworkMonitor</code> interface, to find out the current network state.</p></item>
       <item><p>The new <code>G_DECLARE_TYPE</code> macro reduces the amount boilerplace required when 
creating GObjects in C.</p></item>
-      <item><p><code>g_autoptr</code> now provides automatic cleanup for local variables (supported on 
<app>GCC</app> and <app>Clang</app>).</p></item>
+      <item><p><code>g_autoptr</code> now provides automatic cleanup for local variables (supported on GCC 
and Clang).</p></item>      
       <item><p><code>GSimpleIOStream</code> is a new wrapper which makes it easier to constructe 
<code>GIOStreams</code>.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
@@ -65,36 +69,35 @@
   <section id="builder">
     <title>Builder</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Builder</app> is a brand new IDE, which is intended to make it easy to create GNOME 
applications. This initial &gnomeversion; release is an early preview, which shows editing features, such as 
split view, snippets, auto-indentation and a VIM engine.</p>
-    <p>Backed by a <link href="https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/builder-an-ide-of-our-gnome";>successful 
crowdfunding campaign</link> early in 2015, Christian Hegert, <app>Builder</app>'s lead developer, has big 
plans, including project management, global search, version tracking, debugging, <app>Glade</app> 
integration, and much more.</p>
+    <p>Builder is a brand new IDE, which is intended to make it easy to create GNOME applications. This 
initial &gnomeversion; release is an early preview, which shows editing features, such as split view, 
snippets, auto-indentation and a VIM engine. Builder was backed by a <link 
href="https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/builder-an-ide-of-our-gnome";>successful crowdfunding campaign</link> 
early in 2015, and there are big plans for the future. These include project management functionality, global 
search, version tracking, debugging, Glade integration, and much more.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="multiwriter">
     <title>MultiWriter</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>MultiWriter can be used to write an ISO file to multiple USB devices at once. MultiWriter may be 
useful for QA testing, to create a GNOME Live image for a code sprint or to create hundreds of LiveUSB drives 
for a trade show.</p>
+    <p>MultiWriter is a new application for writing image files to multiple USB devices. It has a range of 
possible applications, including operating system distribution, QA testing, or promotional use of live USB 
drives.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">
     <title>Other Improvements in &gnomeversion;</title>
     <list>
-    <item><p><app>GDK Pixbuf</app> has improved support for loading and saving various image formats, 
including PNG, JPEG, TIFF, ICO and BMP.</p></item>
-    <item><p><app>Tracker</app>'s utilities have been consolidated into a single <code>tracker</code> 
command. This replaces the previous collection of utilities, making it easier and more convenient to work 
with <app>Tracker</app> from the command line. <code>tracker --help</code> can be used to list all available 
subcommands.</p></item>
-    <item><p><app>libsoup</app>, the HTTP client/server library, now supports <link 
href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WebSocket";>WebSockets</link> - support for WebSockets, both client-side 
and server-side.</p></item>
+    <item><p>GDK Pixbuf has improved support for loading and saving various image formats, including PNG, 
JPEG, TIFF, ICO and BMP.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Tracker's utilities have been consolidated into a single <code>tracker</code> command. This 
replaces the previous collection of utilities, making it easier and more convenient to work with Tracker from 
the command line. <code>tracker --help</code> can be used to list all available subcommands.</p></item>
+    <item><p>libsoup, the HTTP client/server library, now supports <link 
href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WebSocket";>WebSockets</link> - support for WebSockets, both client-side 
and server-side.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="future">
     <title>Looking to the Future</title>
-    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes important changes as a part of long-term initiatives for GNOME 
technologies.</p>
+    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes important developments as a part of long-term GNOME technology 
initiatives.</p>
 
     <list>
-      <item><p>Work towards full <app><link href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wayland_
-%28display_server_protocol%29">Wayland</link></app> adoption has continued apace in &gnomeversion;. Features 
like input configuration, pointer barriers are now <app>Wayland</app> compatible, and input handling has made 
major progress through the development of <app>libinput</app>. With these changes, the port to 
<app>Wayland</app> is now approaching its final stages.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Work towards full <link href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wayland_
+%28display_server_protocol%29">Wayland</link> adoption has continued apace in &gnomeversion;. Features like 
input configuration and pointer barriers are now Wayland compatible, and input handling has made major 
progress through the development of libinput. With these changes, the port to Wayland is now approaching its 
final stages.</p></item>
 
-      <item><p>The GNOME community has begun development has begun on an exciting new application deployment 
framework during the &gnomeversion; development cycle. This framework, called <app><link 
href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/SandboxedApps";>XDG App</link></app>, aims to make it possible for 
developers to create applications that can run on multiple distributions, and for those applications to be 
sandboxed for additional security, stability, and ease of update.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The GNOME community has begun development on an exciting new application deployment 
framework. Called <link href="https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/SandboxedApps";>XDG App</link>, this aims to 
make it possible for developers to create applications that can run on multiple distributions, and for those 
applications to be sandboxed for additional security and stability.</p></item>
 
-      <item><p>Finally, the arrival of <app>OpenGL</app> support in <app>GTK+</app> marks a major 
acheivement on the road to the implementation of the <app>GTK+ Scene Graph</app>, which promises to provide 
an advanced animation framework for <app>GTK+</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Finally, the arrival of OpenGL support in GTK+ marks a major acheivement on the road to the 
implementation of the GTK+ Scene Graph, which promises to provide an advanced animation framework for 
GTK+.</p></item>
 
     </list>
 
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index c1b1b30..46c7197 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -26,52 +26,52 @@
 
   <title>Welcome to GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; is the latest version of GNOME 3, and is the result of six months' work by the 
GNOME project. It includes a series of major new features, as well as a large number of smaller improvements 
and enhancements. The release includes &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors; contributors. 
New features and improvements being introduced in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:</p>
+  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; is the latest version of GNOME 3, and is the result of six months' work by the 
GNOME project. It includes major new features, as well as a large number of smaller improvements and 
enhancements. The release incorporates &gitcommits; changes, made by approximately &gitauthors; contributors. 
New features and improvements being introduced in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:</p>
 
   <section id="notifications">
     <title>Notifications Reimagined</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME 3's notifications system has been overhauled for &gnomeversion;. The previous <gui>Message 
Tray</gui> has been replaced by a new message list that provides straightforward access to previous 
notifications, and popup notification banners have been repositioned in order to make them more noticable and 
to prevent them from interfering with applications.</p>
-    <p>As with the previous notifications design, common actions can be taken directly from notification 
popups, allowing you to quickly respond to events as they happen. This includes the ability to reply to chat 
messages.</p>
+    <p>GNOME 3's notifications system has been overhauled for &gnomeversion;. The previous <gui>Message 
Tray</gui> has been replaced by a new message list that provides straightforward access to previous 
notifications, and notification popups (called "banners") have been repositioned in order to make them more 
noticable and to prevent them from interfering with applications.</p>
+    <p>As with the previous notifications design, it is possible to quickly and directly respond to 
notifications through their popup banners. This allows you to do things like quickly snooze an alarm or reply 
to a chat message.</p>
 
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The calendar drop down, which is accessed from the time indicator in the top bar, has also been 
redesigned for &gnomeversion;. Not only does it now present the notifications history, but the new drop down 
also shows event reminders and world times. This gives a great overview of what is currently happening, as 
well as what is scheduled for the day. The addition of weather information and birthday reminders is planned 
for the future.</p>
+    <p>The calendar drop down, which is accessed from the time indicator in the top bar, has also been 
redesigned for &gnomeversion;. Not only does it now present the notifications history, but it also shows 
event reminders and world times. This gives a great overview of what is currently happening, as well as what 
is scheduled for the day. The addition of weather information and birthday reminders is planned for the 
future.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="files">
     <title>Files Improvements</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The <app>Files</app> application has had a number of significant updates for &gnomeversion;. The grid 
and list views have been improved, so that they provide bigger thumbnails, easier to read rows, and have a 
more attractive appearance. They are complemented by a new popover for controlling the view, which makes it 
easy to change the zoom level and sort order from a single place.</p>
+    <p>The Files application has had a number of significant updates for &gnomeversion;. The grid and list 
views have been improved, so that they provide bigger thumbnails, easier to read rows, and have a more 
attractive appearance. They are complemented by a new popover for controlling the view, which makes it easy 
to change the zoom level and sort order from a single place.</p>
     <p>File deletion has also been improved for &gnomeversion;, with the addition of a new, easy to discover 
undo feature. This allows files and folders to be moved to the trash using <key>Delete</key> alone, rather 
than the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq> keyboard combination.</p>
-    <p>Finally, many of the menus in <app>Files</app> have been updated for consistency and logical 
organization.</p>
+    <p>Finally, many of the menus in Files have been updated for consistency and logical organization.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="visuals">
     <title>Updated Visuals</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME 3's visuals have been updated for &gnomeversion;. The <gui>Activities Overview</gui>, login 
screen, system menus and other system components have been given a new, more contemporary look. The new 
visuals are designed to integrate with the visual styles found in GNOME 3 applicaitons, for a more seamless 
experience.</p>
+    <p>GNOME 3's visuals have been updated for &gnomeversion;. The <gui>Activities Overview</gui>, login 
screen, system menus and other system components have been given a new, more contemporary look. The new 
visuals are designed to integrate with the visual style of GNOME applications, for a more seamless 
experience.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="overlay-scollbars">
-    <title>New Look Scollbars</title>
+    <title>New-Look Scollbars</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>&gnomeversion; introduces a new style of scrollbar for GNOME 3. Instead of being shown all the time, 
the new overlay scrollbars are only shown when needed: a small scroll indicator is shown when the pointer is 
moved, and a larger bar appears when control is wanted. This creates a cleaner, less distracting view, which 
helps you to focus on window content.</p>
+    <p>&gnomeversion; introduces a new style of scrollbar for GNOME 3. Instead of being shown all the time, 
these new overlay scrollbars are only shown when needed: a small scroll indicator is shown when the pointer 
is moved, and a larger bar appears when control is wanted. This creates a cleaner, less distracting view, 
which helps you to focus on window content.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="image-viewer">
     <title>Updated Image Viewer</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's <app>Image Viewer</app> application has been redesigned for this release. The new design 
significantly reduces the amount of window chrome, to give more space to the images themselves. A new zoom 
control provides a quick way to conveniently zoom in and out, and the properties sidebar has been refined to 
be easier to read and more attractive.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's Image Viewer application has been redesigned for this release. The new design significantly 
reduces the amount of window chrome, to give more space to the images themselves. A new control provides a 
convenient way to quickly zoom in and out, and the properties sidebar has been refined to be easier to read 
and more attractive.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="new-apps">
     <title>New Preview Applications</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; introduces three new preview applications. These are initial versions that are 
intended for testing, and to give a taste of what is to come in future versions.</p>
+    <p>The drive to create a new suite of core applications continues with GNOME &gnomeversion;, with the 
introduction three new preview applications. These are initial versions that are intended for testing, and to 
give a taste of what is to come in future versions.</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p><app>Calendar</app> provides simple and easy to use window on to your online schedule, and is 
integrated with <app>Online Accounts</app> for seamless setup.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Calendar</app> provides simple and easy to use window on to your online schedule, and is 
integrated with Online Accounts for seamless setup.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Characters</app> is a new character map application. Common characters are quick and 
easy to browse, thanks to category-based browsing. "Type to search" provides a quick and convenient way to 
find characters, and a recent view presents characters that you have used in the past, for ease of 
retrieval.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>Books</app> is a new ebook viewer application for GNOME. The initial version allows 
viewing comic book archives; work on ePub support is ongoing.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Books</app> is a new e-book viewer application for GNOME. The initial version allows 
viewing comic book archives, with ePub support planned for the future.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index b3d3cae..2b2f23e 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -24,45 +24,45 @@
 
   <title>Other Features in GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
 
-  <p>The latest GNOME release includes many other new features and improvements.</p>
+  <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; includes many other new features and improvements. Here are some of them.</p>
 
   <section id="box">
     <title>Better Boxes</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Boxes</app>, the application for virtual and remote machines, has had a large number of user 
interface fixes for &gnomeversion;:</p>
+    <p>Boxes, the application for virtual and remote machines, has had a large number of user interface 
improvements for &gnomeversion;:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Box properties have been reorganised and refined, so they are easier to find and 
understand.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The box creation assistant has been improved, with clearer navigation, URL completion, and 
general cleanups.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The properties interface have been throughly updated. Box settings are now presented in a 
clearer manner and have been reorganised. They have also been placed within a standard dialog window for ease 
of access.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The box creation assistant has been improved, with clearer navigation, URL completion, and 
many small refinements.</p></item>
       <item><p>It is now possible to quickly act on individual boxes, with context menus in the box 
overview, and matching header bar menus when viewing a box.</p></item>
       <item><p>A new menu makes it possible to send keyboard shortcuts that cannot be entered directly into 
a box, such as <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq> and 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>F3</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
       <item><p>Boxes are now automatically paused when they aren't being viewed. This prevents unnecessary 
resource usage.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Display handling has been improved. The display of boxes are now always automatically scaled, 
and an on screen display indicates resolution changes.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Display handling has been improved. With &gnomeversion;, boxes are always automatically 
scaled, and an on screen display indicates resolution changes.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="maps">
     <title>Improved Maps, now with Foursquare</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Maps</app> has had a number of improvements for &gnomeversion;. Information bubbles have been 
added for search results and favorite locations. These show useful information about places, such as their 
address, wheelchair accessibility, and links to <link href="http://www.wikipedia.org/";>Wikipedia</link> 
articles. The new information bubbles also allow locations to be used as the start and end points for travel 
directions, for sending a location to the <app>Weather</app> and <app>Clocks</app> applications, and for 
marking favorite places.</p>
-    <p>Other new features and improvements in <app>Maps</app> include:</p>
+    <p>Maps has had a number of improvements for &gnomeversion;. Information bubbles have been added for 
search results and favorite locations. These show useful information about places, such as their address, 
wheelchair accessibility, and links to <link href="http://www.wikipedia.org/";>Wikipedia</link> articles. The 
new information bubbles also allow locations to be used as the start and end points for travel directions, 
for sending a location to the Weather and Clocks applications, and for marking favorite places.</p>
+    <p>Other new features and improvements in Maps include:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>It is now possible to check into <link href="https://foursquare.com/";>Foursquare</link> 
directly from <app>Maps</app>. To use this feature, add your Foursquare account to <app>Online 
Accounts</app>, and select the current location marker from <app>Maps</app>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>If contacts have addresses, you can search for contacts directly from <app>Maps</app>, if 
they have address information.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>Maps</app> can now gracefully handle when there is no network connection, or when 
location services are turned off.</p></item>
-      <item><p>It is now possible to adjust routes by dragging them on the map.</p></item>
+      <item><p><link href="https://foursquare.com/";>Foursquare</link> check-in: to use this feature, add 
your Foursquare account to Online Accounts, and select the current location marker from Maps.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Contact search: if contacts have address information associated with them, you can search for 
them directly from Maps.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Improved state handling: Maps now gracefully responds when there is no network connection, or 
when location services are turned off.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Route drag and drop: it is now possible to adjust routes by dragging them on the 
map.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="games">
     <title>Games Updates</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>With &gnomeversion;, GNOME's games have had another update. This release includes a fun new sliding 
blocks game, called <app>Taquin</app>. <app>Iagno</app> has also had a number of improvements, including a 
new dialog for starting games and additional themes.</p>
+    <p>With &gnomeversion;, GNOME's games have had another update. This release includes a fun new sliding 
blocks game, called Taquin. Which comes complete with a set of cute cat picture puzzles that you can solve. 
Iagno has also had a number of improvements, including a new dialog for starting games and additional 
themes.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="calculator">
     <title>Calculator History</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's <app>Calculator</app> has a new history view for &gnomeversion;. This makes it possible to 
view previous calculations, and you can quickly copy figures that you have used before. Together, this makes 
performing sequences of calculations much easier. The <app>Calculator</app> now also includes a simplified 
keyboard only mode, for cases when buttons aren't needed.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's Calculator has a new history view for &gnomeversion;. This makes it possible to view previous 
calculations, and you can quickly copy figures that you have used before. Together, this makes performing 
sequences of calculations much easier. The Calculator now also includes a simplified keyboard only mode, for 
cases when buttons aren't needed.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">
@@ -70,18 +70,18 @@
     <p>There are many other smaller improvements in GNOME &gnomeversion;. These include:</p>
 
     <list>
-      <item><p>The GNOME <app>Document Viewer</app> has a nicer sidebar.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Major performance improvements have been made to <app>Photos</app> and 
<app>Music</app>.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>Documents</app> now shows different views for recent documents and 
collections.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Smart playlists have been added to <app>Music</app>, so you can view freqently played and 
recently added tracks. It is now also possible to star your favorite tracks.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The GNOME Document Viewer has a nicer sidebar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Major performance improvements have been made to Photos and Music.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Documents now shows different views for recent documents and collections.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Smart playlists have been added to Music, so you can view freqently played and recently added 
tracks. It is now also possible to star your favorite tracks.</p></item>
       <item><p>Search has been added to the standard file chooser dialog.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Problem reporting controls have been added to <app>Settings</app>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The initial setup assistant now includes a section on privacy controls. Privacy has also been 
improved for geolocation (thanks to the use of https) and the <app>Terminal</app> (as scrollback is now 
encrypted).</p></item>
-      <item><p>In <app>Contacts</app>, small maps are now shown for addresses. These provide a handy link 
through to <app>Maps</app>, where you can see the location in more detail.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Automatic codec installation, which has long been a GNOME feature, has been integrated into 
<app>Software</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Problem reporting controls have been added to Settings.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The initial setup assistant now includes a section on privacy controls. Privacy has also been 
improved for geolocation (thanks to the use of https) and the Terminal (as scrollback is now 
encrypted).</p></item>
+      <item><p>In Contacts, maps are now shown for contact addresses. These provide a link through to Maps, 
where you can see the location in more detail.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Automatic codec installation, which has long been a GNOME feature, has been integrated into 
Software.</p></item>
     </list>
 
-  <p>And, of course, there have been lots of important bug fixes.</p>
+  <p>And, of course, &gnomeversion; includes lots of important bug fixes.</p>
 
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