[california/wip/732302-help] docs: Style edit and typo fix in the quick-add page
- From: Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [california/wip/732302-help] docs: Style edit and typo fix in the quick-add page
- Date: Sat, 13 Sep 2014 15:37:44 +0000 (UTC)
commit 48dfd01a75302dac67caff8d3ed4f8f480f7851b
Author: Jim Campbell <jcampbell gnome org>
Date: Sat Sep 13 10:35:22 2014 -0500
docs: Style edit and typo fix in the quick-add page
The intro to the quick-add feature was too long, so I combined
two of the sentences and removed a paragraph break.
Also corrected a capitalization error.
help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page | 12 +++++-------
1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page b/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page
index 6cd2a82..682d8e2 100644
--- a/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page
+++ b/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page
@@ -21,12 +21,10 @@
<title>Use the Quick Add Feature to Add Events</title>
- <p>One of the best features of <app>California</app> is how it allows you to
- add events to your calendar using everyday language. In <app>California</app>
- this is called the <em>Quick Add</em> feature.</p>
-
- <p>The best way to see how the <em>Quick Add</em> feature works is to look at
- a few examples.</p>
+ <p>One of the best features of <app>California</app> is called the
+ <em>Quick Add</em> feature. It allows you to add events to your calendar
+ using everyday language. Let's look at a few examples to see how it works.
+ </p>
<section id="quick-add-event">
<title>Create Both One-Time and Recurring Events</title>
@@ -35,7 +33,7 @@
one time and events that occur more than once:</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Start by Pressing the <gui>Plus</gui> button in the upper-right
+ <item><p>Start by pressing the <gui>Plus</gui> button in the upper-right
portion of <app>California's</app> <gui>menu bar</gui>, or by pressing
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq>.</p>
<p>The <em>Quick Add</em> window will appear.</p></item>
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