[california/wip/732302-help] docs: Style edit and typo fix in the quick-add page



commit 48dfd01a75302dac67caff8d3ed4f8f480f7851b
Author: Jim Campbell <jcampbell gnome org>
Date:   Sat Sep 13 10:35:22 2014 -0500

    docs: Style edit and typo fix in the quick-add page
    
    The intro to the quick-add feature was too long, so I combined
    two of the sentences and removed a paragraph break.
    
    Also corrected a capitalization error.

 help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page |   12 +++++-------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page b/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page
index 6cd2a82..682d8e2 100644
--- a/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page
+++ b/help/C/cal-event-quick-add.page
@@ -21,12 +21,10 @@
 
   <title>Use the Quick Add Feature to Add Events</title>
   
-  <p>One of the best features of <app>California</app> is how it allows you to
-  add events to your calendar using everyday language. In <app>California</app>
-  this is called the <em>Quick Add</em> feature.</p>
-
-  <p>The best way to see how the <em>Quick Add</em> feature works is to look at
-  a few examples.</p>
+  <p>One of the best features of <app>California</app> is called the
+  <em>Quick Add</em> feature. It allows you to add events to your calendar
+  using everyday language. Let's look at a few examples to see how it works.
+  </p>
 
   <section id="quick-add-event">
     <title>Create Both One-Time and Recurring Events</title> 
@@ -35,7 +33,7 @@
   one time and events that occur more than once:</p>
   
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Start by Pressing the <gui>Plus</gui> button in the upper-right
+    <item><p>Start by pressing the <gui>Plus</gui> button in the upper-right
     portion of <app>California's</app> <gui>menu bar</gui>, or by pressing
     <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq>.</p>
     <p>The <em>Quick Add</em> window will appear.</p></item>


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