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[release-notes/gnome-3-14] proof reading and structure fix ups

commit fae1c24b88d2f0c448186e7620ea94b325520c04
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Sep 12 11:50:41 2014 +0100

    proof reading and structure fix ups

 help/C/developers.page         |    4 ++--
 help/C/figures/placeholder.png |  Bin 30130 -> 17673 bytes
 help/C/index.page              |   21 ++++++++++++++-------
 help/C/more.page               |   25 ++++++++++---------------
 4 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index a1666d5..8c3b6e5 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="gtk-more">
-    <title>Other GTK+</title>
+    <title>Other GTK+ Improvements</title>
     <p>GTK+ 3.14 includes an assortment of other improvements and bug fixes. This includes:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>Automatic loading of menus from resources.</p></item>
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="glib">
-    <title>GLib</title>
+    <title>GLib 3.14</title>
     <p>GLib 3.14 includes:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>Support for new mimeapps spec.</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/figures/placeholder.png b/help/C/figures/placeholder.png
index 5fd5aa7..e52f4a1 100644
Binary files a/help/C/figures/placeholder.png and b/help/C/figures/placeholder.png differ
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 7b9a2a9..f8b0076 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -28,6 +28,12 @@
 
   <p>&gnomeversion; is the latest GNOME release, and the result of six months' work by the GNOME project. It 
includes new features and a large number of smaller improvements and enhancements. The release contains 
&gitcommits; changes by approximately &gitauthors; contributors. New features and improvements being 
introduced in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:</p>
 
+  <section id="captive-portals">
+    <title>Captive Portal Handling</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/captive-portal.png"/>
+<p>GNOME &gnomeversion; comes with improved support for Wi-Fi hotspots. When connecting to a Wi-Fi portal 
that requires authentication, GNOME will now automatically show the login page as a part of the connection 
process. This ensures that you always know when you are connected, and helps you to get set up as quickly as 
possible.</p>
+  </section>
+
   <section id="multitouch">
     <title>Multitouch</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/multitouch.png"/>
@@ -37,12 +43,6 @@
 
   </section>
 
-  <section id="captive-portals">
-    <title>Captive Portal Handling</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/captive-portal.png"/>
-<p>GNOME &gnomeversion; comes with improved support for Wi-Fi hotspots. When connecting to a Wi-Fi portal 
that requires authentication, GNOME will now automatically show the login page as a part of the connection 
process. This ensures that you always know when you are connected, and helps you to get set up as quickly as 
possible.</p>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="weather">
     <title>Weather, Redesigned</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
@@ -52,7 +52,14 @@
   <section id="network-based-sharing">
     <title>Network-Based Sharing</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/sharing.png"/>
-    <p><gui>Personal File Sharing</gui> (WedDAV), <gui>Media Sharing</gui> (DLNA) and <gui>Screen 
Sharing</gui> (VNC) will now remember which network you want them to active on, and <app>Settings</app> 
provides the ability to control which networks to share on. This provides an important privacy function, and 
prevents sharing content and services in public places (such as your local internet cafe).</p>
+    <p><gui>Personal File Sharing</gui> (WedDAV), <gui>Media Sharing</gui> (DLNA) and <gui>Screen 
Sharing</gui> (VNC) will now remember which network you want them to be active on, and <app>Settings</app> 
provides the ability to control which networks to share on. This provides an important privacy function, and 
prevents sharing content and services in public places (such as your local internet cafe).</p>
+  </section>
+
+  <section id="photos">
+    <title>Online Accounts for Photos</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+<p>Photos has gained the ability to access major additional online sources of pictures in &gnomeversion;, 
with the addition of Google and media server support. This means that you can easily view Google photos that 
have been added through Picassa, Google+ or your Android phone. Media server accounts provide access to home 
media servers, using DLNA.</p>
+<p>Both of these online sources can be added using <app>Online Accounts</app>.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">
diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 3c65758..1045623 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#more" group="first"/>
-    <desc>Learn about the improvements to GNOME's applications for 3.14</desc>
+    <desc>Learn about the many other improvements in 3.14</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Allan Day</name>
       <email its:translate="no">allanday gnome org</email>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
   <title>Other Features in GNOME 3.14</title>
 
-  <p>Other stuff...</p>
+  <p>The latest GNOME release includes many other new features and improvements.</p>
 
   <section id="animations">
     <title>New Animations</title>
@@ -41,20 +41,13 @@
   <section id="theme">
     <title>Reworked Visual Theme</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/adwaita.png"/>
-<p>A huge amount of attention to detail has gone into GNOME &gnomeversion;. The visual theme used by 
applications has been overhauled from the ground up, with many subtle improvements. Switches have a different 
appearance, have improved animations, and can be slid from one side to another. Progress bars have a new, 
more compact appearance. Spinners have a new design, and menus have an improvemd appearance.</p>
-  </section>
-
-  <section id="photos">
-    <title>More Online Accounts for Photos</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-<p>Photos has gained the ability to access major additional online sources of pictures in &gnomeversion;, 
with the addition of Google and media server support. This means that <app>Photos</app> can now access Google 
photos that have been added through Picassa, Google+ or your Android phone. Media server accounts provide 
access to home media servers, using DLNA.</p>
-<p>Both of these online sources can be added using the <app>Online Accounts</app>.</p>
+<p>A huge amount of attention to detail has gone into GNOME &gnomeversion;. The visual theme used by 
applications has been overhauled from the ground up, with many subtle improvements. Switches have a different 
appearance, have improved animations, and can be slid from one side to another. Progress bars have a new, 
more compact appearance. Spinners have a new design, and menus have an improved appearance.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="games">
     <title>New-Look Games</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-<p>GNOME's games have continued to modernize for this release. <app>Mines</app> and <app>Sudoku</app> have 
both been redesigned, and have new graphics and improved user interfaces. A new game has also been introded 
for &gnomeversion;. Called <app>Hitori</app>, this is a number-based puzzle game, similar to Sudoku.</p>
+<p>GNOME's games have continued to modernize for this release. <app>Mines</app> and <app>Sudoku</app> have 
both been redesigned, and have new graphics and improved user interfaces. A new game has also been introduced 
for &gnomeversion;. Called <app>Hitori</app>, this is a number-based puzzle game, similar to Sudoku.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="yelp">
@@ -71,16 +64,18 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">
-    <title>Other Improvements</title>
+    <title>Even More</title>
+    <p>There are many other smaller improvements in GNOME 3.14. These include:</p>
 
     <list>
-      <item><p><app>Contacts</app> has received a batch of user interface improvements. Contact creation now 
happens in-line, rather than in a dialog, and the setup assistant has been improved. Many dialogs have also 
been refined to match GNOME 3 design guidelines.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Gedit includes a collection of improvements in &gnomeversion;. Opening documents has been 
improved in <app>gedit</app> &gnomeversion; with a new popover, which allows you to quickly search recent 
documents. <app>gedit</app> includes a collection of other smaller improvments, including a new header bar 
menu and new and updated keyboard shortcuts and mnemonics.</p></item>
-      <item><p><app>Music</app> has gained a powerful new search feature, which allows you to search either 
your local music collection or online sources, such as <link href="http://magnatune.com/";>Mangatune</link> 
and <link href="https://www.jamendo.com";>Jamendo</link>. With 3.14, it is also possible to create your own 
music playlists.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Maps</app> has a new route planning feature for &gnomeversion;. Implemented using the 
open source <link href="https://graphhopper.com/";>GraphHopper</link>, this allows you to plan journeys by 
foot, bicycle or car. It is possible to add points along your desired route, and the route is displayed as a 
simple set of instructions.</p></item>
       <item><p>System search has become even more useful, with the addition of search providers from 
<app>Calculator</app> and <app>Clocks</app>. This allows you to find the time for a city or perform 
calculations directly from the search box.</p></item>
       <item><p>When using several monitors, GNOME will now remember which display each window has been 
placed on. This is particularly useful for laptops with docking stations.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>gedit</app> includes a collection of improvements in &gnomeversion;. Opening documents 
has been improved in <app>gedit</app> &gnomeversion; with a new popover, which allows you to quickly search 
recent documents. <app>gedit</app> includes a collection of other smaller improvements, including a new 
header bar menu and new and updated keyboard shortcuts and mnemonics.</p></item>
       <item><p>GNOME's geolocation framework has been improved, by using <link 
href="https://location.services.mozilla.com/";>Mozilla's Location Service</link> for 3G and network-based 
positioning. This results in increased accuracy, which will continue to improve in the future.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Contacts</app> has received a batch of user interface improvements. Contact creation now 
happens in-line, rather than in a dialog, and the setup assistant has been improved. Many dialogs have also 
been refined to match GNOME 3 design guidelines.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Music</app> has gained a powerful new search feature, which allows you to search either 
your local music collection or online sources, such as <link href="http://magnatune.com/";>Magnatune</link> 
and <link href="https://www.jamendo.com";>Jamendo</link>. With 3.14, it is also possible to create your own 
music playlists.</p></item>
+
       <item><p>Touch screen support has been improved with reliable on-screen keyboard behaviour.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
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