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[gnome-user-docs] sharing pages fixes, status updates

commit d7b656789e5ab1130bfbf854d6e7a8aa11f70727
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Sun Mar 23 16:03:01 2014 -0400

    sharing pages fixes, status updates

 gnome-help/C/files-share.page         |    9 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page    |    6 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page     |   23 ++++++++++++-----------
 gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page       |    5 +++--
 gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page    |    5 +++--
 6 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-share.page b/gnome-help/C/files-share.page
index 3a7896f..09e9fef 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-share.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-share.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     manager.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.3" date="2013-05-11" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -38,8 +39,8 @@
 file manager.</p>
 
   <note style="important">
-    <p>Before you begin, make sure <app>Evolution</app> is installed on your
-    computer, and your email account is configured.</p>
+    <p>Before you begin, make sure <app>Evolution</app> or <app>Geary</app> is
+    installed on your computer, and your email account is configured.</p>
   </note>
 
 <steps>
@@ -47,8 +48,8 @@ file manager.</p>
   <item><p>Open the <app>Files</app> application from the <gui>Activities</gui>
   overview.</p></item>
   <item><p>Locate the file you want to transfer.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Right-click the file and select <gui>Send To</gui>. The
-  <gui>Compose Message</gui> window will appear with the file attached.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Right-click the file and select <gui>Email…</gui> The
+  <gui>New Message</gui> window will appear with the file attached.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>To</gui> to choose a contact, or enter an email address
   where you want to send the file. Fill in the <gui>Subject</gui> and the body
   of the message as required and click <gui>Send</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
index ae84cdc..7620594 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" version="0.2" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>View and edit files on another computer over FTP, SSH, Windows
     shares, or WebDAV.</desc>
@@ -41,8 +42,9 @@ internet/network address.</p>
 
 <steps>
   <title>Connect to a file server</title>
-  <item><p>In the file manager, click <gui>Files</gui> in the top bar and pick
-  <gui>Connect to Server</gui> from the app menu.</p></item>
+  <item><p>In the file manager, click <gui>Connect to Server</gui> in the
+   sidebar.</p>
+  </item>
   <item><p>Enter the address of the server, in the form of a
    <link xref="#urls">URL</link>. Details on supported URLs are
    <link xref="#types">listed below</link>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index fecb71b..1ffded6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="settings-sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.3" date="2013-05-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -51,26 +52,26 @@
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
 
       <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
-      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
-      network.</p></note>
+      you to edit it, you can <link xref="sharing-displayname">change</link>
+      the name your computer displays on the network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Screen Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To let others view your desktop, switch <gui>Remote View</gui> to
+      <p>To let others view your desktop, switch <gui>Screen Sharing</gui> to
       <gui>ON</gui>. This means that other people will be able to attempt to
       connect to your computer and view what's on your screen.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>To let others interact with your desktop, switch
-      <gui>Remote Control</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This may allow the other
-      person to move your mouse, run applications, and browse files on your
-      computer, depending on the security settings which you are currently
+      <gui>Allow Remote Control</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This may allow the
+      other person to move your mouse, run applications, and browse files on
+      your computer, depending on the security settings which you are currently
       using.</p>
 
       <note style="tip">
-        <p>This option is enabled by default when <gui>Remote View</gui> is
+        <p>This option is enabled by default when <gui>Screen Sharing</gui> is
         <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
       </note>
 
@@ -84,9 +85,9 @@
  option means before changing it.</p>
   <terms>
     <item>
-      <title>Approve All Connections</title>
+      <title>New connections must ask for access</title>
       <p>If you want to be able to choose whether to allow someone to access
- your desktop, switch <gui>Approve All Connections</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.
+ your desktop, enable <gui>New connections must ask for access</gui>.
  If you disable this option, you will not be asked whether you want to allow
  someone to connect to your computer.</p>
       <note style="tip">
@@ -94,9 +95,9 @@
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <title>Require Password</title>
+      <title>Require a Password</title>
       <p>To require other people to use a password when connecting to your
- desktop, switch <gui>Require Password</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. If you do
+ desktop, enable <gui>Require a Password</gui>. If you do
  not use this option, anyone can attempt to view your desktop.</p>
       <note style="tip">
         <p>This option is disabled by default, but you should enable it and set
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page
index 9777671..c0b9cdc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="settings-sharing" group="#first"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-08" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
   <title>Set the display name for your computer</title>
 
-  <p>You can change the name your computer uses to display itself on other
+  <p>You can change the name your computer uses to display itself to other
   computers or devices, on the network or over Bluetooth.</p>
 
   <steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
index feca52f..b600d3c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="settings-sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -48,8 +49,8 @@
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
 
       <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
-      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
-      network.</p></note>
+      you to edit it, you can <link xref="sharing-displayname">change</link>
+      the name your computer displays on the network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Media Sharing</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
index dc5f0b0..32b868c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="settings-sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.1" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -57,8 +58,8 @@
       <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
 
       <note style="info"><p>If the text below <gui>Computer Name</gui> allows
-      you to edit it, you can change the name your computer displays on the
-      network.</p></note>
+      you to edit it, you can <link xref="sharing-displayname">change</link>
+      the name your computer displays on the network.</p></note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui>Personal File Sharing</gui>.</p>
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