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[gnome-user-docs] bluetooth page fixes, status updates

commit 6eadf2237ba8e98009e37252074f85b8f9e9e389
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Sun Mar 23 10:30:26 2014 -0400

    bluetooth page fixes, status updates

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page     |   36 ++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page          |   52 ++++++++++--------------
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page                    |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page            |    2 +-
 8 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 62 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index 1e4a05f..14c1af7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.4" date="2014-03-16" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Pair Bluetooth devices.</desc>
 
@@ -65,39 +65,19 @@
       device will open.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>If a PIN is not required, set the <gui>Connection</gui> switch to
-      <gui>ON</gui> and click <gui>Done</gui>. The entry for the device in the
-      <gui>Devices</gui> list will show a status of <gui>Connected</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>PIN options</gui> to set how a PIN will be delivered to the
-      other device.</p>
-      <note>
-       <p>The automatic PIN setting will use a six-digit numerical code. A
-        device with no input keys or screen, such as a mouse or headset, may
-        require a specific PIN such as 0000, or no PIN at all. Check your
-        device's manual for the proper setting.</p>
-      </note>
-      <p>Choose an appropriate PIN setting for your device, then click
-      <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Continue</gui> to proceed.  If you did not choose a preset
-      PIN, the PIN will be displayed on the screen.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
       <p>If required, confirm the PIN on your other device. The device should
-      show you the PIN you see on your computer screen, or may prompt you to
-      enter the PIN. Confirm the PIN on the device, then click
-      <gui>Matches</gui>.</p>
+      show you the PIN you see on your computer screen. Confirm the PIN on the
+      device (you may need to click <gui>Pair</gui> or
+      <gui>Confirm</gui>), then click <gui>Confirm</gui> on the computer.</p>
       <p>You need to finish your entry within about 20 seconds on most devices,
       or the connection will not be completed. If that happens, return to the
       device list and start again.</p>
-      <p>A message appears when the connection successfully completes. Click
-      <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Done</gui>. The entry for the device in the
+      <p>A panel specific to the external device appears when the connection
+      successfully completes. It may display additional options applicable to
+      the type of device to which you're connecting. Select the desired options
+      and click <gui>Done</gui>. The entry for the device in the
       <gui>Devices</gui> list will show a status of <gui>Connected</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
index c8e26fb..548f989 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>The adapter could be turned off or may not have drivers, or Bluetooth
     might be disabled or blocked.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
index d8e829b..adbf679 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.4" date="2014-03-04" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Remove a device from the list of Bluetooth devices.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
index 321ac5e..1f88a55 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Share files to Bluetooth devices such as your phone.</desc>
 
@@ -43,43 +44,33 @@
   <p>You can send files to connected Bluetooth devices, such as some mobile
   phones or other computers. Some types of devices don't allow the transfer
   of files, or specific types of files. You can send files using the Bluetooth
-  icon on the top bar, or from the Bluetooth settings window.</p>
+  settings window.</p>
 </if:choose>
 
-<comment>
-<cite date="2013-05-11" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
-  <p>The functionality in the following line was temporarily removed in 3.8</p>
-  <p>To send files directly from the file manager, see <link xref="files-share"/>.</p>
-</comment>
-
-  <note style="important">
-    <p>Before you begin, make sure Bluetooth is enabled on your computer.
-    See <link xref="bluetooth-turn-on-off"/>.</p>
-  </note>
-
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <if:choose>
-        <if:when test="platform:unity">
-      <p>Click the Bluetooth icon in the menu bar and select <gui>Send Files to
-      Device</gui>.</p>
-        </if:when>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
-    </if:choose>
+      <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
+      expand.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-    <if:choose>
-      <if:when test="platform:gnome-shell">
-      <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
-      </if:when>
-    </if:choose>
+      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Make sure Bluetooth is enabled: the switch in the titlebar should be
+      set to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the <gui>Devices</gui> list, select the device to which to send the
-      files to and click <gui>Send Files...</gui>.</p>
-      <p>If the desired device is not shown in the list, you need to
-      <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">connect</link> to it.</p>
+      files. If the desired device is not shown as <gui>Connected</gui> in the
+      list, you need to <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">connect</link>
+      to it.</p>
+      <p>A panel specific to the external device appears.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Send Files...</gui> The file chooser appears.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Choose the file you want to send and click <gui>Select</gui>.</p>
@@ -88,8 +79,9 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>The owner of the receiving device usually has to press a button to
-      accept the file. Once the owner accepts or declines, the result of the
-      file transfer will be shown on your screen.</p>
+      accept the file. Once the owner accepts, the
+      <gui>Bluetooth File Transfer</gui> progress bar will be shown on your
+      screen. Click <gui>Cancel</gui> when the transfer is complete.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index f2a0b96..9fd6db6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-04" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
index a7a72e6..ce85a32 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-04" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
 
     <desc>Whether or not other devices can discover your computer.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index bba7c3e..8453121 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
 
   <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
   <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
index 54442e6..79e82a8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.1" date="2013-05-13" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" version="0.3" date="2014-03-08" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-08" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
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