[release-notes/gnome-3-12] core ux page - refine existing content. rough out a few more sections

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit a63dd1c5b57abb7a198c67e2da00c99eda772c0f
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 17 15:14:57 2014 +0000

    core ux page - refine existing content. rough out a few more sections

 help/C/more-core-ux.page |   15 ++++++---------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 9790dd6..3cf16b9 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     <title>A Big Step Towards Wayland</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/wayland.png" style="floatright" />
     <p><app>Wayland</app> is the next generation technology for display and input on Linux. Initial 
experimental <app>Wayland</app> support was introduced last release. Since then, a huge amount of progress 
has been made towards full <app>Wayland</app> adoption, which will deliver improved graphics, important bug 
fixes, and will lay the basis for more secure applications.</p>
-    <p>Progress towards <app>Wayland</app> in the last six months includes x, y and z. If you are a 
developer or early adopter, you can test this work: see the <link type="topic" 
xref="developers#wayland">developer notes</link> for more details. Continued progress on the road to 
<app>Wayland</app> is planned for the next GNOME release.</p>
+    <p>A huge amount of progress has been made towards <app>Wayland</app> in the last six months. New 
functionality has been added for logging in and input handling. Stability has been also been improved, as has 
compatibility with older <app>X11</app> applications. If you are a developer or early adopter, you can test 
this work: see the <link type="topic" xref="developers#wayland">developer notes</link> for more details. 
Continued progress on the road to <app>Wayland</app> is planned for the next GNOME release.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="popovers">
@@ -60,17 +60,14 @@
   <section id="tabs">
     <title>Restyled Tabs</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-
-Visual style offers a clearer affordance for dragging.
-
-Ensures clean separation between tabs and the content below: useful for content with different background 
colors, or when dynamic interface elements can appear below the tab.
-
+    <p>Tabs have had a design refresh for 3.12. The new visual style works more harmoneously in a variety of 
contexts, such as when tab content has varied background colors, or when tabs are embedded in other widgets. 
They also make the most of the screen space available, and the new style offers clear visual hints about the 
ability to drag tabs.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="bluetooth">
     <title>New Bluetooth Settings</title>
-    <p><app>Settings</app> has a new <gui>Bluetooth</gui> section in this release. Redesigned from scratch, 
the new panel...</p>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/> 
+    <p>GNOME 3.12 includes new <gui>Bluetooth</gui> settings. Redesigned from scratch, the new settings have 
been simplified to make them easier to use. Instead of requiring the user to use a separate switch to make 
their device discoverable, or to press a button to add a new device, the panel automatically discovers 
available devices when it is opened. This means that pairing a new device is simply a matter of clicking on 
the device once it has been automatically discovered.</p>
+    <p>The new bluetooth settings also include new, redesigned properties dialogs for bluetooth devices.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="core-ux-other">
@@ -81,7 +78,7 @@ Ensures clean separation between tabs and the content below: useful for content
       <item><p>An updated symbolic icon theme, with many improved icons.</p></item>
       <item><p>Visual theme refinements, including smoother separators by window close buttons, improved 
backgrounds for pressed buttons and more attractive floating toolbars.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improved animations: several transitions have been given smooth animations in 3.12, the 
startup zoom animation has been refined, and animations for dragging windows to the screen edge have been 
greatly improved.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Improved keyboard navigation in the Activities Overview.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Improved keyboard navigation in the <gui>Activities Overview</gui>.</p></item>
       <item><p>The default wallpaper has been updated to use a new style that matches the default lock 
screen image. Like previous default wallpapers, this one subtly changes appearance over the course of the 
day.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>