[seahorse/wip/userdocs] help: Fix style, some minor updates.



commit 273957743e724010bb7b850aca96bfe313e82bea
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Sun Mar 16 23:13:06 2014 +0530

    help: Fix style, some minor updates.

 help/C/passwords-view.page     |   15 +++++-----
 help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page |   33 ++++++++++++++++++++---
 help/C/ssh-create.page         |   56 ++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 3 files changed, 65 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/passwords-view.page b/help/C/passwords-view.page
index 63b7e9a..52a1344 100644
--- a/help/C/passwords-view.page
+++ b/help/C/passwords-view.page
@@ -58,16 +58,17 @@
       password.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
+
   <note style="important">
     <p>Since the contents of any unlocked keyrings are available to programs
-    you may be running, and Passwords and Keys does not seek to give a false
-    sense of security, the contents of unlocked keyrings are able to be viewed
-    without entering the password.</p>
-    <p>This means that, if you are logged-in, the contents of the Login
-    keyring will available without entering a password from Passwords and Keys.
-    </p>
+    you may be running, and <app>Passwords and Keys</app> does not seek to give
+    a false sense of security, the contents of unlocked keyrings are able to be
+    viewed without entering the password.</p>
+    <p>This means that if you are logged-in, the contents of the
+    <gui>Login</gui> keyring will available without entering a password from
+    <app>Passwords and Keys</app>.</p>
     <p>If you need to lend your computer to another person, it is recommended
-    to create a user account for them, or allow them to use the Guest
+    that you create a user account for them, or allow them to use a guest
     account.</p>
   </note>
 
diff --git a/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page b/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page
index 40bca7a..e59398a 100644
--- a/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/ssh-connect-remote.page
@@ -27,12 +27,37 @@
   <title>Connect to other computers</title>
 
   <p>You can use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to install your SSH key onto a
-remote computer. If the other computer is configured p</p>
+  remote computer that can run an SSH server. You can also
+  <link xref="ssh-create#ssh-create-key-and-set-up">set up your SSH key for
+  remote login while creating the key</link>.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>First step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Right click on the <gui>SSH key</gui> and select <gui>Configure Key
+      for Secure Shell…</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>In the dialog window that opens, enter the <gui>Server address</gui>
+      that you normally use to log in to the remote computer via SSH, and press
+      <gui>Set Up</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The program will now attempt to connect to the specified
+      <gui>Server address</gui> with the entered <gui>Login Name</gui>.If there
+      are any problems in accessing the remote computer, a pop-up window will
+      appear that explains the problem, and you can try again. Make sure that
+      you have a network connection and that the remote computer is on and
+      accessible.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>If connection to the remote computer was successful, a dialog box will
+      appear which asks for the <gui>Password</gui> you use to log in to the
+      remote computer. Enter your password, then press
+      <gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>You should now be able to log in to the remote computer via SSH without a
+  password.</p>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/ssh-create.page b/help/C/ssh-create.page
index 9299e0b..69b165e 100644
--- a/help/C/ssh-create.page
+++ b/help/C/ssh-create.page
@@ -36,18 +36,18 @@
       <item><p>Select <gui>Secure Shell Key</gui> and then click
       <gui>Continue</gui>.</p></item>
       <item><p>Enter a description for the key. The key description will help
-      you to identify the key later. For example, you could enter today's date,
-      something about how the key will be used, or the server name on which you
-      intend to install the key. The description field is optional, and how you
-      describe the key is entirely up to you.</p></item>
+      you to identify the key later. For example, you could enter the date for
+      the day, something about how the key will be used, or the server name on
+      which you intend to install the key. The description field is optional,
+      and how you describe the key is entirely up to you.</p></item>
       <item><p>You can change default settings for encryption type or key
-      strength by expanding the Advanced key options panel.</p></item>
+      strength by expanding the <gui>Advanced key options</gui> panel.</p></item>
     </steps>
 
   <p>At this point, you can just create your key, or create your key
   and install it on a remote computer to enable password-free login.</p>
 
-  <section id="ssh-just-create-key" ui:expanded="true">
+  <section id="ssh-just-create-key" ui:expanded="false">
     <title>Create your key and do not set up remote login</title>
     <p>You can create the SSH key, and choose to set it up later.</p>
 
@@ -57,10 +57,7 @@
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>Type a passphrase for your SSH key and press
-       <gui style="button">OK</gui>. When you try to use this SSH key, your
-       operating system will prompt you for this passphrase. This ensures
-       that if someone gets access to your SSH key, they can't use it without
-       the passphrase.</p>
+       <gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>Retype the passphrase and press <gui style="button">OK</gui> to
@@ -71,23 +68,26 @@
     <p>The SSH key will now be listed in the <gui>OpenSSH keys</gui>
     keyring.</p>
 
+    <note style="tip">
+      <p> When you try to use your SSH key, your operating system will prompt
+      you for the passphrase used during creation. This ensures that if someone
+      gets access to your SSH key, they can't use it without the
+      passphrase.</p>
+    </note>
+
   </section>
 
-  <section id="ssh-create-key-and-set-up" ui:expanded="true">
+  <section id="ssh-create-key-and-set-up" ui:expanded="false">
     <title>Create your key and install it on a remote computer</title>
     <p>One of the most useful things about having an SSH key is that you can
     install the public key on a remote computer. Doing this allows you to log
     in to a remote computer with SSH without needing to enter your password
     every time.</p>
+
     <steps>
       <item>
-       <p>If you are in the process of creating a new SSH key:
-         <p>Press the <gui style="button">Create and Set Up</gui> button,
-         and follow the instructions on entering a passphrase, above.</p>
-       </p>
-       <p>If you have a preexisting key which you want to install on
-       a remote computer: right click on the <gui>SSH key</gui> and select
-       <gui>Configure Key for Secure Shell...</gui>.</p>
+       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Create and Set Up</gui> button, and
+       follow the instructions on entering a passphrase, above.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>In the dialog window that opens, enter the <gui>Server address</gui>
@@ -95,13 +95,12 @@
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>Ensure that the <gui>Login name</gui> you use on the remote
-       computer is correct.</p>
+       computer is correct, and press <gui>Set Up</gui>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Set Up</gui> button to proceed.
-       The program will now attempt to connect to the specified <gui>Server
-       address</gui> with the entered <gui>Login name</gui>.</p>
-       <p>If there are any problems in accessing the remote computer, a pop-up
+       <p>The program will now attempt to connect to the specified
+       <gui>Server address</gui> with the entered <gui>Login Name</gui>.If
+       there are any problems in accessing the remote computer, a pop-up
        window will appear that explains the problem, and you can try again.
        Make sure that you have a network connection and that the remote
        computer is on and accessible.</p>
@@ -111,13 +110,14 @@
        will appear which asks for the <gui>Password</gui> you use to log in to
        the remote computer. Enter your password, then press
        <gui style="button">OK</gui>.</p>
-       <p>The public part of the selected SSH key will now be installed on the
-       remote computer and configured to allow password-free SSH login.</p>
-       <p>If the this step was successful, the dialog will close.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
-    <p>You should now be able to log in to the remote computer via SSH without
-    a password.</p>
+
+    <p>The public part of the selected SSH key will now be installed on the
+    remote computer and configured to allow password-free SSH login. You should
+    now be able to log in to the remote computer via SSH without a
+    password.</p>
+
     <note style="tip">
       <p>Password-free login will currently only available when done from your
       current local computer. When logging in, the SSH program will read the


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