[gnome-documents] Review collections help page for 3.12

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 91b42448ab4bd3099e939634dae1fd743ffaf85e
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 16 12:55:48 2014 +0000

    Review collections help page for 3.12

 help/C/collections.page |   55 ++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/collections.page b/help/C/collections.page
index 07da281..da016c3 100644
--- a/help/C/collections.page
+++ b/help/C/collections.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#print" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.90" date="2012-09-05" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-16" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Julita Inca</name>
@@ -17,10 +18,15 @@
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Group related documents in a collection.</desc>
+    <desc>Group related documents together to help sort them.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Make collections of documents</title>
@@ -36,48 +42,43 @@
     - Can you put collections inside collections?</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p><app>Documents</app> lets you put together documents of different types in
-  one place called a <em>collection</em>. If you have documents that are
-  related, you can group them to make them easier to find. For example, if you
-  had a business trip where you made a presentation, your slides, your flight
-  itinerary (a PDF file), your budget spreadsheet, and other hybrid PDF/ODF
-  documents, can be grouped in one collection.</p>
+  <p>You can put together documents of different types in one place which is
+  called a <em>collection</em>. If you have documents that are related, you can
+  group them to make them easier to find. For example, if you had a business
+  trip where you made a presentation, your slides, a PDF of your flight
+  itinerary, your budget spreadsheet, and other word processor and PDF
+  documents can be grouped in one collection.</p>
 
-  <p>To create or add to a collection:</p>
-  <list>
+  <steps>
+    <title>To create or add to a collection:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>✓</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Press the <gui>✓</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In selection mode, check the documents to be collected.</p>
+      <p>In selection mode, select related documents.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>+</gui> button in the button bar.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui>Add to Collection</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the collection list, click <gui>Add</gui> and type a new collection
-      name, or select an existing collection. The selected documents will be
-      added to the collection.</p>
+      <p>In the collection list, press on <gui>Create new collection</gui>
+      twice and type a new collection name, or select an existing collection.
+      The selected documents will be added to the collection.</p>
     </item>
-  </list>
-
-  <note>
-    <p>Collections do not behave like folders and their hierarchy: <em>you
-    cannot put collections inside collections.</em></p>
-  </note>
+  </steps>
 
-  <p>To delete a collection:</p>
-  <list>
+  <steps>
+    <title>To delete a collection:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Click the <gui>✓</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In selection mode, check the collection to be deleted.</p>
+      <p>In selection mode, select the collection that you want to delete.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the Trash button in the button bar. The collection will be
-      deleted, leaving the original documents.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Delete</gui>. The collection will be
+      deleted, leaving the original documents as they are.</p>
     </item>
-  </list>
+  </steps>
 
 </page>