[gnome-user-docs] system-admin-guide: minor fixes

[Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit ac44eb0b7ab71839b7974b7591264fc66a977c10
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Thu Mar 6 15:17:32 2014 +0100

    system-admin-guide: minor fixes

 system-admin-guide/C/autostart-applications.page |    7 +++++--
 system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page      |   12 +++++++-----
 system-admin-guide/C/custom-session-create.page  |    2 +-
 system-admin-guide/C/enterprise-login.page       |    3 +--
 system-admin-guide/C/login-background.page       |    2 +-
 system-admin-guide/C/processes.page              |   11 +++++------
 6 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/autostart-applications.page 
b/system-admin-guide/C/autostart-applications.page
index b5346c8..4c511ca 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/autostart-applications.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/autostart-applications.page
@@ -26,10 +26,13 @@
   you need to create a <file>.desktop</file> file for that application in the
   <file>/etc/xdg/autostart/</file> directory.</p>
 
+  <p>To manage autostart (startup) applications for individual users, use the
+  <app>gnome-session-properties</app> application.</p>
+
 <steps>
   <title>To add an autostart application for all users:</title>
-  <item><p>Create a .desktop file in the <file>/etc/xdg/autostart/</file>
-  directory:</p>
+  <item><p>Create a <file>.desktop</file> file in the
+  <file>/etc/xdg/autostart/</file> directory:</p>
 <code>[Desktop Entry]
 Type=Application
 Name=<var>Files</var>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page b/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page
index 0a947e7..dce4743 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/backgrounds-extra.page
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     <desc>How do I make extra backgrounds available to my users?</desc>
   </info>
 
-<title>Extra backgrounds</title>
+  <title>Add extra backgrounds</title>
 
   <p>You can make extra backgrounds available to users on your system.</p>
 
@@ -45,11 +45,13 @@
 ]]></code>
 
 <section id="backgrounds-extra-two-wallpapers">
-  <title>Add multiple backgrounds</title>
-  <p>In one configuration file, it is possible to add multiple backgrounds
-   by adding more &lt;wallpaper&gt; elements.</p>
+  <title>Specify multiple backgrounds</title>
+  <p>In one configuration file, you can specify multiple
+  <code>&lt;wallpaper&gt;</code> elements to add more backgrounds.
+  </p>
   <p>See the following example which shows an <sys>XML</sys> file with two
-  &lt;wallpaper&gt; elements</p>
+  <code>&lt;wallpaper&gt;</code> elements, adding two different backgrounds:
+  </p>
 
 <code><![CDATA[
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session-create.page b/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session-create.page
index 9a8b70b..d090f27 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session-create.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/custom-session-create.page
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Exec=<input>gnome-session --session=new-session</input></code>
    with arguments, to execute. You can run the custom session with the
    <cmd>gnome-session --session=<var>new-session</var></cmd>
    command.</p>
-   <p>For more information on parameters that you can use with
+   <p>For more information on the parameters that you can use with
    <cmd>gnome-session</cmd>, see the <cmd>gnome-session</cmd>(1)
    man page.</p>
   </item>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/enterprise-login.page b/system-admin-guide/C/enterprise-login.page
index 1339831..06697f6 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/enterprise-login.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/enterprise-login.page
@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@
     <title>Configure enterprise credentials</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="help:gnome-help/shell-terminology">Activities</gui>
-      overview and
-      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/login-background.page b/system-admin-guide/C/login-background.page
index cb07174..34cab1c 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/login-background.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/login-background.page
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
   </p>
 
 <steps>
-<title>Setting the org.gnome.desktop.background.picture-uri Key</title>
+<title>Set the org.gnome.desktop.background.picture-uri key</title>
   <item><p>Create a <sys>gdm</sys> database for machine-wide settings in
   <file>/etc/dconf/db/gdm.d/<var>01-corp-login</var></file>:</p>
 <code>[org/gnome/desktop/background]
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page b/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page
index 400c1ff..3acb55b 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/processes.page
@@ -27,11 +27,10 @@
 
   <title>Typical processes</title>
 
-
   <p>In a stock <app>GNOME</app> session, programs called
   <link href="man:daemon"><app>daemon</app></link> run on the system as
   background processes. You should find the following daemons running by
-   default:</p>
+  default:</p>
 
    <terms>
      <item>
@@ -46,7 +45,7 @@
      </item>
      <item>
        <title>gnome-keyring-daemon</title>
-       <p>Credentials such as username and password for various programs and
+       <p>Credentials such as user name and password for various programs and
        websites are stored securely using the <app>gnome-keyring-daemon</app>.
        This information is written into an encrypted file called the keyring
        file and saved in the user's home directory.</p>
@@ -61,7 +60,7 @@
        default session for the user is set at the time of system installation
        by the system administrator. <app>gnome-session</app> typically loads
        the last session that ran successfully on the system.</p>
-       <p>For extended information consider reading the manual page for
+       <p>For extended information, consider reading the manual page for
        <link href="man:gnome-session">gnome-session</link>.</p>
      </item>
      <item>
@@ -100,8 +99,8 @@
      <item><p>gnome-shell-calendar-server</p></item>
      <item><p>goa-daemon</p></item>
      <item><p>gsd-printer</p></item>
-     <item><p>various evolution factor processes</p></item>
-     <item><p>various gvfs processes</p></item>
+     <item><p>various Evolution factory processes</p></item>
+     <item><p>various GVFS processes</p></item>
    </list>
 
 </page>