[tali/mallard-help] help: rephrased the 2nd step



commit c5dc0f452159c92a46ba9fb38f9ef8c45308bf05
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jul 16 16:29:56 2014 +0530

    help: rephrased the 2nd step

 help/C/scores.page |    7 +++----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index ff28b89..5491fdf 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -24,10 +24,9 @@
     <steps>
       <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-      <item><p> The dialog will display the <gui>Regular</gui> version by
-      default, to view scores obtained in <gui>Colors</gui>, select it from the
-      drop down menu at the top of the dialog.</p></item>
-      <!-- whats with you describing the UI! the gui tag is to markup the UI visually so dont say things 
like "dialog" or point out where in the UI it is like "bottom left" and stuff. rewrite this sentence -->
+      <item><p>The <gui>Regular</gui> version is displayed by default, to view
+      scores obtained in <gui>Colors</gui>, select it from the drop down menu.
+      </p></item>
     </steps>
 
   <section id="score-slots">


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