[gnome-web-www] Make the language more inclusive.



commit bbd3f71f99c2c86b4c21476d230ef4de8a6a5397
Author: Marina Zhurakhinskaya <marinaz redhat com>
Date:   Tue Feb 25 18:04:41 2014 -0500

    Make the language more inclusive.

 theme/opw/index.html |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/theme/opw/index.html b/theme/opw/index.html
index 5a261f2..ec7dc82 100644
--- a/theme/opw/index.html
+++ b/theme/opw/index.html
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
     <div class="container" id="home">
         <div class="span24 top-intro">
             <div class="span13">
-                <p>The Outreach Program for Women (OPW) helps women get involved in free  and open source 
software. We provide a supportive community for  beginning to contribute any time throughout the year and 
offer focused internship opportunities twice a year with a number of free software organizations.</p>
+                <p>The Outreach Program for Women (OPW) helps women (cis and trans) and genderqueer get 
involved in free and open source software. We provide a supportive community for beginning to contribute any 
time throughout the year and offer focused internship opportunities twice a year with a number of free 
software organizations.</p>
             </div>
             <div class="clearfix"></div>
         </div>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
             <h2>Apply</h2>
             <p>Application process is now open for the new round of the Outreach Program for Women 
internships. The application deadline is March 19, 2014 and internship dates are May 19 to August 18. Coding, 
design, documentation and other projects are available. The applicants are asked to collaborate with mentors 
from the <a 
href="https://wiki.gnome.org/OutreachProgramForWomen/2014/MayAugust/#Participating_Organizations";>participating
 organizations</a> to make a contribution relevant to the project they are applying for during the 
application process.
 
-            <p>Women who are students applying to work on coding projects are <a 
href="https://wiki.gnome.org/OutreachProgramForWomen#Is_Google_Summer_of_Code_right_for_you.3F";>encouraged</a>
 to apply for <a href="http://www.google-melange.com/gsoc/homepage/google/gsoc2014";>Google Summer of Code</a> 
as well. The administrators of both programs will coordinate to accept the top applicants for one of the 
programs.
+            <p>Applicants who are students applying to work on coding projects are <a 
href="https://wiki.gnome.org/OutreachProgramForWomen#Is_Google_Summer_of_Code_right_for_you.3F";>encouraged</a>
 to apply for <a href="http://www.google-melange.com/gsoc/homepage/google/gsoc2014";>Google Summer of Code</a> 
as well. The administrators of both programs will coordinate to accept the top applicants for one of the 
programs.
 
             <p> In both programs, the accepted participants will work remotely, while being guided by their 
mentor, and receive $5,500 stipend.
 
@@ -198,9 +198,9 @@
 
         <div class="span24 section" id="about">
             <h2>About</h2>
-            <p>The Outreach Program for Women (OPW)  was inspired by Google's Summer of Code  and by how few 
women applied for it. The GNOME Foundation first started the OPW with one round in 2006, and then resumed the 
effort in 2010 with rounds organized twice a year. In the May-August 2012 round, the Software Freedom 
Conservancy joined the OPW with one internship with the Twisted project. In the January-April 2013 round, 
many other free and open source organizations joined the program.</p>
+            <p>The Outreach Program for Women (OPW) was inspired by Google's Summer of Code  and by how few 
women applied for it. The GNOME Foundation first started the OPW with one round in 2006, and then resumed the 
effort in 2010 with rounds organized twice a year. In the May-August 2012 round, the Software Freedom 
Conservancy joined the OPW with one internship with the Twisted project. In the January-April 2013 round, 
many other free and open source organizations joined the program.</p>
 
-            <p>This program is a welcoming link that connects <strong>talented and passionate women</strong> 
with people working  in free and open source software and guides them through their first contribution. 
Through OPW, women learn how exciting and  valuable work on software freedom can be, while helping us to 
build a more inclusive community. </p>
+            <p>This program is a welcoming link that connects <strong>talented and passionate 
newcomers</strong> with people working in free and open source software and guides them through their first 
contribution. Through OPW, participants learn how exciting and valuable work on software freedom can be, 
while helping us to build a more inclusive community. </p>
             
             <p>Follow <a href="http://www.twitter.com/fossopw";>@fossopw</a> on Twitter to get the latest 
news.</p>
             </div>


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