[epiphany] Update help index and introduction
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [epiphany] Update help index and introduction
- Date: Mon, 24 Feb 2014 23:05:54 +0000 (UTC)
commit 26996e9f803ba2b95a9cdcbfff300e45e8ef55e0
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date: Mon Feb 24 22:56:40 2014 +0000
Update help index and introduction
Index <desc> is now used as the project description on h.g.o/users, so
should contain something of interest to users and "epiphany" because
"web" is a poor search term on the internet.
Using epiphany will not make the web any more nicer a place. Would be
good to mention something about privacy as it's a moderately big
feature. Can't think of a nice way to fit it in right now.
<p> inside <media> are alt text, used to describe the image and double
up as instructions for retaking the screenshot.
help/C/index.page | 5 ++++-
help/C/introduction.page | 15 +++++++++------
2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index fc4c41d..4b28ca1 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -9,7 +9,10 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
- <desc><app>Web</app>, a web browser designed for GNOME.</desc>
+ <desc><app>Web</app>, formally known as <app>Epiphany</app>, is the GNOME
+ web browser. Get started with <app>Web</app> and learn about the available
+ features.</desc>
+
</info>
<title>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index b27501c..b93b2f3 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -15,21 +15,24 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
- <desc>An introduction to <app>Web</app>, a web browser
- designed for GNOME.</desc>
+ <desc>An introduction to <app>Web</app>, a web browser for GNOME with
+ built-in privacy.</desc>
</info>
<title>Introduction</title>
- <p><app>Web</app> offers a simple, clean, beautiful view of the
- Web. Powered by WebKit, it displays pages with the same
- speed and accuracy as other popular browsers.</p>
+ <p><app>Web</app> offers a simple and clean way to browse the internet. It
+ displays pages with the same speed and accuracy as other popular
+ browsers.</p>
<p><app>Web</app> is the application formerly known as
<app>Epiphany</app>.</p>
<media type="image" mime="image/png" src="media/epiphany-3-12.png">
- <p>Screenshot of Web with two tabs open.</p>
+ <!--This is the alt text, as read out by screen readers and if the image is
+ missing. It also describes how to re-create the image.-->
+ <p>Fullscreen screenshot of Web with the Web wiki page open in the first
+ tab and showing the GNOME website open in the second tab.</p>
</media>
</page>
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