[epiphany] Update help index and introduction



commit 26996e9f803ba2b95a9cdcbfff300e45e8ef55e0
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 24 22:56:40 2014 +0000

    Update help index and introduction
    
    Index <desc> is now used as the project description on h.g.o/users, so
    should contain something of interest to users and "epiphany" because
    "web" is a poor search term on the internet.
    
    Using epiphany will not make the web any more nicer a place. Would be
    good to mention something about privacy as it's a moderately big
    feature. Can't think of a nice way to fit it in right now.
    
    <p> inside <media> are alt text, used to describe the image and double
    up as instructions for retaking the screenshot.

 help/C/index.page        |    5 ++++-
 help/C/introduction.page |   15 +++++++++------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index fc4c41d..4b28ca1 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -9,7 +9,10 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc><app>Web</app>, a web browser designed for GNOME.</desc>
+    <desc><app>Web</app>, formally known as <app>Epiphany</app>, is the GNOME
+    web browser. Get started with <app>Web</app> and learn about the available
+    features.</desc>
+
   </info>
 
   <title>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index b27501c..b93b2f3 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -15,21 +15,24 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>An introduction to <app>Web</app>, a web browser
-    designed for GNOME.</desc>
+    <desc>An introduction to <app>Web</app>, a web browser for GNOME with
+    built-in privacy.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Web</app> offers a simple, clean, beautiful view of the
-  Web. Powered by WebKit, it displays pages with the same
-  speed and accuracy as other popular browsers.</p>
+  <p><app>Web</app> offers a simple and clean way to browse the internet. It
+  displays pages with the same speed and accuracy as other popular
+  browsers.</p>
 
   <p><app>Web</app> is the application formerly known as
   <app>Epiphany</app>.</p>
 
   <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="media/epiphany-3-12.png">
-    <p>Screenshot of Web with two tabs open.</p>
+    <!--This is the alt text, as read out by screen readers and if the image is
+    missing. It also describes how to re-create the image.-->
+    <p>Fullscreen screenshot of Web with the Web wiki page open in the first
+    tab and showing the GNOME website open in the second tab.</p>
   </media>
 
 </page>


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