[epiphany] Review new help pages for 3.12

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 99cc1aa863d35ee1cc5420da2dab156b6e58e572
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 24 22:39:33 2014 +0000

    Review new help pages for 3.12

 help/C/pref-do-not-track.page        |   30 +++++++++++++-------------
 help/C/prob-restore-closed-page.page |   37 ++++++++++++++++-----------------
 2 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-do-not-track.page b/help/C/pref-do-not-track.page
index 077758d..a23e4b1 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-do-not-track.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-do-not-track.page
@@ -6,38 +6,38 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#privacy" />
     <link type="guide" xref="pref"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-01-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-24" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
       <email its:translate="no">baptistem gnome org</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
-<!--    <credit type="copyright editor">
-      <name></name>
-      <email its:translate="no"></email>
-      <years></years>
-    </credit>-->
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>How do I tell websites I do not them to monitor my web activites?</desc>
+    <desc>How do I tell websites that I do not want them to monitor my online
+    activites?</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Set web tracking preference</title>
 
-  <p>Websites generally monitor your activity when you visit them. For example,
-  they may want to know which pages you view or what you have searched for. This
-  information can be used to improve your web browsing experience, but it can
-  also be sold can be used to sell or shared with other companies which may use
-  it in a malicious way. You can ask websites that you visit to not monitor your
+  <p>Some websites can monitor your activity when you visit them. For example,
+  they may want to know which pages you view or what you have searched for.
+  This information can be used to improve your web browsing experience, but it
+  can also be sold or shared with other companies which may use it in a
+  malicious way. You can ask websites which you visit to not monitor your
   activity by enabling <gui>Do Not Track</gui>.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
-      <gui style="tab">Privacy</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Open
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui><gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui><gui 
style="tab">Privacy</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Tick the <gui style="checkbox">Tell web sites I do no want to
diff --git a/help/C/prob-restore-closed-page.page b/help/C/prob-restore-closed-page.page
index 916c27b..d3e595a 100644
--- a/help/C/prob-restore-closed-page.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-restore-closed-page.page
@@ -5,45 +5,44 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#prob" />
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-01-28" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-24" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
       <email its:translate="no">baptistem gnome org</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
-<!--    <credit type="copyright editor">
-      <name></name>
-      <email its:translate="no"></email>
-      <years></years>
-    </credit>-->
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>I want to reopen a web page I closed by mistake.</desc>
+    <desc>I want to reopen a web page that I closed by mistake.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>How can I restore a tab?</title>
 
-  <p>You can restore the pages you closed as long as the last window of
-  <app>Web</app> is not closed.</p>
+  <p>You can restore the pages you closed as long as at least one
+  <app>Web</app> is still open.</p>
 
-  <!-- Not sure we need steps here actually-->
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Reopen Closed Tab</gui></guiseq>, your lastest
-      closed tab will be reopened again.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p style="menuitem">Repeat this operation as many times as needed to restore all
-      closed pages.</p>
+      <p>Open <guiseq><gui style="menu">Web</gui><gui style="menuitem">Reopen
+      Closed Tab</gui></guiseq>, your last closed tab will be reopened.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>Repeat the step as many times as you need to until the tab that you want
+  is restored. Tabs will be restored in reverse order to how you closed them.
+  Once you have restored all the closed tabs, you will not be able to restore
+  any more tabs.</p>
+
   <note style="important">
-    <p>It is not possible to restore a closed tab in <link
-    xref="browse-private">private browsing</link> mode.</p>
+    <p>It is not possible to restore a closed tab in
+    <link xref="browse-private">private browsing</link> mode.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>