[gnome-klotski/mallard-help] help: rephrase moves.page



commit bb0ab1d69ae47d3825cd091e5d5033ef8bf92a55
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Aug 27 11:20:15 2014 +0530

    help: rephrase moves.page

 help/C/moves.page |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/moves.page b/help/C/moves.page
index a261834..4faab32 100644
--- a/help/C/moves.page
+++ b/help/C/moves.page
@@ -15,22 +15,22 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
-    <desc>Check the number of moves you made.</desc>
-<!-- Say a line about "A move is blah blah and you can move them towards the goal piece" you know what am 
hinting at?-->
+    <desc>A move is shifting the block to desired location, and you have to
+   move patterned block towards the goalpiece.</desc>
+
   </info>
 
   <title>Moves</title>
-<!-- starting the setence with "The" is not correct, revise -->
-  <p>The consecutive moves of a block are considered to be a single move. For
+
+  <p>Consecutive moves of a block are considered to be a single move. For
   example, moving a block up one square then right two squares is considered one
   move.</p>
 
   <section id="patterned-block-moves">
     <title>Goal piece moves</title>
       <p>The goal location may be positioned slightly off the board. The
-      goal piece, which is the patterned block, is always permitted to move to
-      it. However, no other blocks are permitted to move off the board.</p>
+      goal piece, which is the patterned block, can move to it. However, no
+      other blocks can move off the board.</p>
   </section>
-  <!-- What is the meaning "permitted to move to it", what is it? -->
  
 </page>


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