[gnome-klotski/mallard-help] help: rephrase moves.page
- From: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-klotski/mallard-help] help: rephrase moves.page
- Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2014 05:50:49 +0000 (UTC)
commit bb0ab1d69ae47d3825cd091e5d5033ef8bf92a55
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date: Wed Aug 27 11:20:15 2014 +0530
help: rephrase moves.page
help/C/moves.page | 14 +++++++-------
1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/moves.page b/help/C/moves.page
index a261834..4faab32 100644
--- a/help/C/moves.page
+++ b/help/C/moves.page
@@ -15,22 +15,22 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <desc>Check the number of moves you made.</desc>
-<!-- Say a line about "A move is blah blah and you can move them towards the goal piece" you know what am
hinting at?-->
+ <desc>A move is shifting the block to desired location, and you have to
+ move patterned block towards the goalpiece.</desc>
+
</info>
<title>Moves</title>
-<!-- starting the setence with "The" is not correct, revise -->
- <p>The consecutive moves of a block are considered to be a single move. For
+
+ <p>Consecutive moves of a block are considered to be a single move. For
example, moving a block up one square then right two squares is considered one
move.</p>
<section id="patterned-block-moves">
<title>Goal piece moves</title>
<p>The goal location may be positioned slightly off the board. The
- goal piece, which is the patterned block, is always permitted to move to
- it. However, no other blocks are permitted to move off the board.</p>
+ goal piece, which is the patterned block, can move to it. However, no
+ other blocks can move off the board.</p>
</section>
- <!-- What is the meaning "permitted to move to it", what is it? -->
</page>
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