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[gnome-user-docs] Privacy updates for 3.10, 2 defunct topics stubbed

commit 8b3d5168969e26678473bf55c624334391cbc152
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Sun Sep 29 20:40:44 2013 -0400

    Privacy updates for 3.10, 2 defunct topics stubbed

 ...s.page => privacy-hide-notifications.page.stub} |    6 +++
 gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page       |   31 +++++++++-----
 ...lity.page => privacy-name-visibility.page.stub} |    0
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page                    |   45 +++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page              |   36 +++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/privacy.page                          |   10 +++-
 gnome-help/C/settings-sharing.page                 |    6 ++-
 gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page                 |    8 ++-
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                             |    2 -
 9 files changed, 99 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-hide-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-hide-notifications.page.stub
similarity index 85%
rename from gnome-help/C/privacy-hide-notifications.page
rename to gnome-help/C/privacy-hide-notifications.page.stub
index 534142c..7a98dcf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-hide-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-hide-notifications.page.stub
@@ -15,6 +15,12 @@
 
   <title>Hide notifications</title>
 
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2013-09-28" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">Michael Hill</cite>
+    <p>Removed from Privacy panel. Rewrite this page to reflect the
+    Notifications panel added for 3.10.</p>
+  </comment>
+
   <p>By default, your computer will display message notifications even when
   your screen is locked. For example, if someone sends you an instant
   message while you are away from your computer, a notification will pop-up on
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
index e36b941..4ddda09 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-history-recent-off">
 
@@ -9,11 +10,11 @@
   <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-11" status="final"/>
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-    <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
   </credit>
   <credit type="editor">
     <name>Michael Hill</name>
-    <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
   </credit>
 </info>
 
@@ -21,19 +22,27 @@
   
     <p>Tracking recently-used files and folders can make it easier to
     find items that you have been working on, but you may wish to keep
-    these items private. To turn off the file history tracking features of your
-    desktop:</p>
+    these items private.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select
-    <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui><gui style="menu">Privacy</gui>
-    <gui style="menu">Usage &amp; History</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Set the <gui>Recently Used</gui> slider to <gui>Off</gui>.</p></item>
+    <title>To turn off the file history tracking features of your desktop:</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Usage &amp; History</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+     <p>Set the <gui>Recently Used</gui> switch to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
   
-    <p>To re-enable this feature, set the <gui>Recently Used</gui> slider to
-    <gui>On</gui>.</p>
+    <p>To re-enable this feature, set the <gui>Recently Used</gui> switch to
+    <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
 
     <note><p>This setting will not affect how your web browser stores
     information about the web sites you visit.</p></note>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-name-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-name-visibility.page.stub
similarity index 100%
rename from gnome-help/C/privacy-name-visibility.page
rename to gnome-help/C/privacy-name-visibility.page.stub
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index a2dcfbb..9193bc4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-purge">
 
@@ -6,14 +7,14 @@
   <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
   <desc>Set how often your trash and temporary files will be cleared
   from your computer.</desc>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-06" status="candidate"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-29" status="review"/>
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-    <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
   </credit>
   <credit type="editor">
     <name>Michael Hill</name>
-    <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
   </credit>
 </info>
   <title>Purge trash &amp; temporary files</title>
@@ -27,17 +28,33 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Automatically empty your trash and clear your temporary files after
     a set period of time:</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the <gui>top bar</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Settings</gui> and click the <gui>Privacy</gui>
-    icon.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <gui>Purge Trash &amp; Temporary Files</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Set the <gui>Automatically Purge Trash</gui> or
-    <gui>Automatically Purge Temporary Files</gui> sliders to <gui>On</gui>.
-    </p></item>
-    <item><p>Set how often you would like your <em>Trash</em> and
-    <em>Temporary Files</em> to be purged by changing the
-    <gui>Purge After</gui> value.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Purge Trash &amp; Temporary Files</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Set the <gui>Automatically Purge Trash</gui> or
+      <gui>Automatically Purge Temporary Files</gui> switches to
+      <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Set how often you would like your <em>Trash</em>  and
+      <em>Temporary Files</em> to be purged by changing the
+      <gui>Purge After</gui> value.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Use the <gui>Empty Trash</gui> or <gui>Purge Temporary Files</gui>
+      buttons to perform these actions immediately.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="warning"><p>Use the <em>Purge After: Immediately</em> setting
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
index 5ba7bb9..0893833 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+  xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
   type="topic" style="task"
   id="privacy-screen-lock">
 
@@ -13,15 +14,15 @@
     go away from your computer.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
-      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit>
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -43,16 +44,31 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To set the length of time before your screen locks
     automatically:</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
-    </p></item>
-    <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Privacy</gui><gui>Screen Lock</gui></guiseq>.
-    </p></item>
-    <item><p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched on, then
-    select a length of time from the drop-down list.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Privacy</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched on, then
+      select a length of time from the drop-down list.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To allow notifications to be displayed on the lock screen, switch
+      <gui>Show Notifications</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>When your screen is locked, and you want to unlock it, press
-  <key>Esc</key>, or swipe up from the bottom of your screen with your mouse.
+  <key>Esc</key>, or swipe up from the bottom of the screen with your mouse.
   Then enter your password, and press <key>Enter</key> or click
   <gui>Unlock</gui>.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
index 59bf6f8..42e0079 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
@@ -1,21 +1,25 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="guide" style="task 2column"
       id="privacy">
 
 <info>
   <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-02-26" status="draft"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-28" status="review"/>
     <desc>
       <link xref="privacy-screen-lock">Screen lock</link>,
-      <link xref="privacy-name-visibility">Name &amp; visibility</link>,
       <link xref="privacy-history-recent-off">Usage history</link>,
       <link xref="privacy-purge">Purge trash &amp; temporary files</link>…
     </desc>
   <credit type="author">
     <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-    <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     <years>2013</years>
   </credit>
+  <credit type="editor">
+    <name>Michael Hill</name>
+    <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+  </credit>
 </info>
 
   <title>Privacy Settings</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/settings-sharing.page b/gnome-help/C/settings-sharing.page
index 8d7bbdc..5f6918d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/settings-sharing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/settings-sharing.page
@@ -1,18 +1,20 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="guide" style="task 2column"
       id="settings-sharing">
 
 <info>
   <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.1" date="2013-05-08" status="draft"/>
+  <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-09-28" status="review"/>
     <desc>
       <link xref="sharing-bluetooth">Bluetooth sharing</link>,
+      <link xref="sharing-personal">Personal file sharing</link>,
       <link xref="sharing-desktop">Screen sharing</link>,
       <link xref="sharing-media">Media sharing</link>…
     </desc>
   <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     <years>2013</years>
   </credit>
   <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
index 5596546..a291a64 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="sharing-personal">
   <info>
@@ -9,7 +10,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Let other people access files in your <file>Public</file> folder.</desc>
@@ -45,10 +46,11 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Sharing</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sharing</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If <gui>Sharing</gui> is <gui>OFF</gui>, switch it to
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index bdf69d0..e972520 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -340,9 +340,7 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        printing-to-file.page \
        printing.page \
        privacy.page \
-       privacy-hide-notifications.page \
        privacy-history-recent-off.page \
-       privacy-name-visibility.page \
        privacy-purge.page \
        privacy-screen-lock.page \
        screen-shot-record.page \
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