[gnome-user-docs] Update additional display help for 3.10



commit dec230882100a81657245bb7766a05462268339e
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Sep 24 00:05:34 2013 +0100

    Update additional display help for 3.10
    
    Remove duplicate page and update the instructions for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page |   74 -----------------------
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page         |   48 +++++++++------
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                          |    5 +-
 3 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 96 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index 6bd8eb5..d04775a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -17,14 +17,19 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your laptop.</desc>
+    <desc>Set up an additional monitor.</desc>
   </info>
 
-<title>Connect an external monitor to your laptop</title>
+<title>Connect another monitor to your computer</title>
 
+<!-- TODO: update video
 <section id="video-demo">
   <title>Video Demo</title>
   <media its:translate="no" type="video" width="500" mime="video/webm" 
src="figures/display-dual-monitors.webm">
@@ -64,30 +69,34 @@
     </tt:tt>
   </media>
 </section>
+-->
 
 <section id="steps">
-  <title>Set up an external monitor</title>
-  <p>To set up an external monitor with your laptop, connect the monitor to
-  your laptop. If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would
-  like to adjust the settings:</p>
+  <title>Set up an additional monitor</title>
+  <p>To set up an additional monitor, connect the monitor to your computer. If
+  your system does not recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
+  the settings:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
+<!-- It is not possible to switch monitors off or on in 3.10
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or
-      deactivate, then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
+      <p>Click on the monitor that you would like to activate or deactivate,
+      then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.</p>
+    </item>-->
     <item>
       <p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is
-      the main monitor. To change which monitor is "main", click on the top bar
-      and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as the "main"
-      monitor.</p>
+      the main monitor. To change which monitor is treated as "main", click on
+      the top bar and drag it over to the monitor which you want to set as the
+      "main" monitor.</p>
     </item>
+<!-- This does not work in 3.10 like this
     <item>
       <p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it to the
       desired position.</p>
@@ -96,13 +105,14 @@
         the <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
+-->
     <item>
-      <p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then
-      click <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.</p>
+      <p>To rotate the orientation of the monitor, click on it and use the
+      buttons with the arrows to rotate it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the <gui>x</gui> in
-      the top corner.</p>
+      <p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then
+      click <gui>Keep Changes</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 </section>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index c085941..5856e91 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ EXTRA_DIST = C/gnome-help.its
 
 HELP_ID = gnome-help
 
-HELP_LINGUAS = as ca cs de el fi fr es gl gu hi hu id it ja kn lv nl pa pt_BR ru sl sr sr latin sv te vi ta 
zh_CN
-
 HELP_MEDIA = \
        figures/audio-volume-high-symbolic.svg \
        figures/audio-volume-low-symbolic.svg \
@@ -183,7 +181,6 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        disk-partitions.page \
        disk.page \
        display-dual-monitors.page \
-       display-dual-monitors-desktop.page \
        documents-collections.page \
        documents-filter.page \
        documents-formats.page \
@@ -405,3 +402,5 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        wacom-multi-monitor.page \
        wacom-stylus.page \
        wacom.page
+
+HELP_LINGUAS = as ca cs de el fi fr es gl gu hi hu id it ja kn lv nl pa pt_BR ru sl sr sr latin sv te vi ta 
zh_CN


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