[gnome-user-docs] Reflow display-dual-monitors*



commit f8ae44d1142176ece3562a7cab0be366ac186c20
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 23 23:33:14 2013 +0100

    Reflow display-dual-monitors*

 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page |   86 +++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page         |  174 +++++++++++------------
 2 files changed, 131 insertions(+), 129 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
index ed9cb06..05b82c4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
@@ -1,60 +1,74 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="display-dual-monitors-desktop">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your desktop computer.</desc>
+    <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
-      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+
+    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your desktop computer.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
 <title>Connect an extra monitor</title>
 
- <p>To set up a second monitor with your desktop computer, connect the monitor.
-     If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
-     the settings:
-  </p>
+  <p>To set up a second monitor with your desktop computer, connect the
+  monitor. If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like
+  to adjust the settings: </p>
 
   <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or deactivate,
-           then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is the main monitor. To 
change which monitor is
-           "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
-           the "main" monitor.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it to the desired
-           position.</p>
-           <note><p>If you would like both monitors to display the same content, check the
-                    <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.</p></note>
-  </item>
-
-  <item><p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then click
-           <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the <gui>x</gui> in the top
-           corner.
-  </p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or
+      deactivate, then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is
+      the main monitor. To change which monitor is "main", click on the top bar
+      and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as the "main"
+      monitor.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it to the
+      desired position.</p>
+      <note>
+        <p>If you would like both monitors to display the same content, check
+        the <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.</p>
+      </note>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then
+      click <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the <gui>x</gui> in
+      the top corner.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index ead667f..6bd8eb5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -4,119 +4,107 @@
       id="display-dual-monitors">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your laptop.</desc>
+    <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-23" status="outdated"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
-      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="editor">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
-      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="prefs-display"/>
 
+    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your laptop.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Connect an external monitor to your laptop</title>
 
- <section id="video-demo">
-   <title>Video Demo</title>
-    <media its:translate="no" type="video" width="500" mime="video/webm" 
src="figures/display-dual-monitors.webm">
+<section id="video-demo">
+  <title>Video Demo</title>
+  <media its:translate="no" type="video" width="500" mime="video/webm" 
src="figures/display-dual-monitors.webm">
     <p its:translate="yes">Demo</p>
     <tt:tt its:translate="yes" xmlns:tt="http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml";>
-        <tt:body>
-          <tt:div begin="1s" end="3s">
-            <tt:p>Type <input>displays</input> in the Activities overview to open the
-           <gui>Displays</gui> settings.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-          <tt:div begin="3s" end="9s">
-            <tt:p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or deactivate,
-           then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-          <tt:div begin="9s" end="16s">
-            <tt:p>The monitor with the top bar is the main monitor. To change which monitor is
-           "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
-           the "main" monitor.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-          <tt:div begin="16s" end="25s">
-            <tt:p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it to the desired
-           position.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-          <tt:div begin="25s" end="29s">
-            <tt:p>If you would like both monitors to display the same content, check the
-                    <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-          <tt:div begin="29s" end="33s">
-            <tt:p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then click
-           <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-          <tt:div begin="33s" end="37s">
-            <tt:p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the <gui>x</gui> in the top
-           corner.
-            </tt:p>
-          </tt:div>
-
-        </tt:body>
-
-      </tt:tt>
-
-    </media>
-  </section>
-
-
+      <tt:body>
+        <tt:div begin="1s" end="3s">
+          <tt:p>Type <input>displays</input> in the Activities overview to open
+          the <gui>Displays</gui> settings.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+        <tt:div begin="3s" end="9s">
+          <tt:p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or
+          deactivate, then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+        <tt:div begin="9s" end="16s">
+          <tt:p>The monitor with the top bar is the main monitor. To change
+          which monitor is "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to
+          the monitor you want to set as the "main" monitor.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+        <tt:div begin="16s" end="25s">
+          <tt:p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it
+          to the desired position.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+        <tt:div begin="25s" end="29s">
+          <tt:p>If you would like both monitors to display the same content,
+          check the <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+        <tt:div begin="29s" end="33s">
+          <tt:p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui>
+          and then click <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+        <tt:div begin="33s" end="37s">
+          <tt:p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the
+          <gui>x</gui> in the top corner.</tt:p>
+        </tt:div>
+      </tt:body>
+    </tt:tt>
+  </media>
+</section>
 
-  <section id="steps">
+<section id="steps">
   <title>Set up an external monitor</title>
-  <p>To set up an external monitor with your laptop, connect the monitor to your laptop.
-     If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
-     the settings:
-  </p>
+  <p>To set up an external monitor with your laptop, connect the monitor to
+  your laptop. If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would
+  like to adjust the settings:</p>
 
   <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or deactivate,
-           then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is the main monitor. To 
change which monitor is
-           "main", click on the top bar and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as
-           the "main" monitor.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it to the desired
-           position.</p>
-           <note><p>If you would like both monitors to display the same content, check the
-                    <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.</p></note>
-  </item>
-
-  <item><p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then click
-           <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-
-  <item><p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the <gui>x</gui> in the top
-           corner.
-  </p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on the image of the monitor you would like to activate or
+      deactivate, then switch it <gui>ON/OFF</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The monitor with the <link xref="shell-introduction">top bar</link> is
+      the main monitor. To change which monitor is "main", click on the top bar
+      and drag it over to the monitor you want to set as the "main"
+      monitor.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To change the "position" of a monitor, click on it and drag it to the
+      desired position.</p>
+      <note>
+        <p>If you would like both monitors to display the same content, check
+        the <gui>Mirror displays</gui> box.</p>
+      </note>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>When you are happy with your settings, click <gui>Apply</gui> and then
+      click <gui>Keep This Configuration</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To close the <gui>Displays Settings</gui> click on the <gui>x</gui> in
+      the top corner.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 </section>
 
-
 </page>


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