[release-notes/gnome-3-10] tweaks

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 01e08ad9dfe06498001a4d87ba0aa4219260a0b9
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Sep 17 13:56:40 2013 +0100

    tweaks

 help/C/more-apps.page    |    2 +-
 help/C/more-core-ux.page |    6 +++---
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/more-apps.page b/help/C/more-apps.page
index a0cafca..ae899de 100644
--- a/help/C/more-apps.page
+++ b/help/C/more-apps.page
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 
   <section id="music">
     <title>Music</title>
-    <p><app>Music</app> is planned to be the default audio player application for GNOME 3. It is featuring 
in GNOME &gnomeversion; as a technology preview. <app>Music</app> provides a clean and focused interface for 
browsing your music collection according to Artist, Album or Track. Support for playing music on media 
servers (via UPNP) and fetching music from online sources is planned for the future.</p>
+    <p><app>Music</app> is planned to be the default audio player application for GNOME 3, and it is making 
its debut in GNOME &gnomeversion; as a technology preview. <app>Music</app> provides a clean and focused 
interface for browsing your music collection according to Artist, Album or Track. Support for playing music 
on media servers (via UPNP) and fetching music from online sources is planned for the future.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/gnome-music.png"/>
     </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 4713a82..c0a060d 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -84,10 +84,10 @@
     <p>Other enhancements to the core user experience include:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>An improved login screen, with a better layout and nicer transitions.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Baseline alignment of text labels, resulting in more evenly and consistently aligned 
text.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A keyboard navigable top bar calendar, and sliders in the system status menu that can be used 
with the <app>Orca</app> screen reader.</p></item>
       <item><p>Better looking lock screen notifications.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Baseline alignment</p></item>
-      <item><p>The accessibility of the core user experience has been polished by turning the Calendar menu 
keyboard navigable and making sliders accessible from the screen reader.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Orca, the GNOME screen reader, can be easily turn on or off at any time just by pressing 
<keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Alt</key><key>S</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A Orca, the GNOME screen reader, can be easily turn on or off at any time just by pressing 
<keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Alt</key><key>S</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>