[release-notes/gnome-3-10] tweak

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 71c6e80409aaa6fbc1db4b692c7685b7ea657b8c
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Sep 17 10:25:19 2013 +0100

    tweak

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   <section id="wayland">
     <title>Next Stop Wayland</title>
-    <p><app>Wayland</app> is the next generation GNOME display server. It promises to deliver improved 
graphics performance. &gnomeversion; introduces experimental <app>Wayland</app> support, and is an important 
milestone on the road to full adoption. This allows developers to try GNOME running under <app>Wayland</app>, 
and will allow work towards complete Wayland adoption to move forward.</p>
+    <p><app>Wayland</app> is the next generation GNOME display server. It promises to deliver smoother 
graphics performance, with improved animations and transitions. <app>Wayland</app>'s modern architecture will 
provide greater flexibility for developers, and enable more secure sandboxed applications. &gnomeversion; 
introduces experimental <app>Wayland</app> support, which allows GNOME 3 and GNOME applications to be run 
directly on top of Wayland. This is an important milestone on the road to full <app>Wayland</app> adoption, 
and will developers to test their software in a <app>Wayland</app> environment. More details about this can 
be found in the <link type="topic" xref="developers#wayland">developer notes</link>.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/wayland.png"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="system-status">
     <title>Integrated System Status</title>
-    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; features a new, redesigned system status area. In previous versions, the system 
status area was made up by a series of menus in the corner of the top bar. The new system status area 
replaces this with a single menu. This allows you to quickly see an overview of the state of your device, 
also allows a more focused top bar which only displays information that you care about, a consistent approach 
for the lock and login screens, and an enhanced aeroplane mode. In addition, it provides easier mouse 
interaction, privacy improvements, and a new screen brightness slider.</p>
+    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; features a new, redesigned system status area. In previous versions, the system 
status area was made up of a series of menus in the corner of the top bar. The new system status area 
replaces this with a single menu. This allows you to quickly see an overview of the state of your device, and 
gives a more focused top bar which only displays information that you care about. Among many improvements, 
the new menu provides easier mouse interaction, privacy enhancements, a new screen brightness slider, and a 
better aeroplane mode.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/status-menu.png"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="header-bars">
     <title>Header Bars</title>
-    <p>A new interface element has been introduced in &gnomeversion;: header bars. These merge applications' 
title bars and toolbars into a single element, reducing the amount of interface chrome within each window, 
and gives more screen space to the content within the window. Header bars also allows more dynamic 
application interfaces, whose controls adjust to the current view. They also ensures that window close 
buttons are always present, irrespective of whether the window is maximized or not.</p>
+    <p>A new interface element has been introduced in &gnomeversion;: header bars. These merge applications' 
title bars and toolbars into a single element, reducing the amount of interface chrome within each window, 
and giving more screen space to content. Header bars also allows more dynamic application interfaces whose 
controls adjust to the current view, and they ensure that window close buttons are always present, 
irrespective of whether the window is maximized or not.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/header-bars.png"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="new-apps">
     <title>New Applications</title>
-    <p>GNOME's mission to provide a high quality set of modern applications continues in GNOME 
&gnomeversion;. In addition to <app>Software</app> and <app>Maps</app>, there is a whole collection of other 
new applications being introduced, includings <app>Music</app>, <app>Photos</app> and <app>Notes</app>. For 
more details, see <link type="topic" xref="more-apps"/>.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's mission to provide a high quality set of modern applications continues in GNOME 
&gnomeversion;. In addition to <app>Software</app> and <app>Maps</app>, there is a whole collection of other 
new applications being introduced, including <app>Music</app>, <app>Photos</app> and <app>Notes</app>. For 
more details, see <link type="topic" xref="more-apps"/>.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>