[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 66/68] Review stopwatch help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit b5579962d272bfeb7eb62b74f48b61db4ec7d530
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 23:06:31 2013 +0100

    Review stopwatch help page

 help/C/stopwatch.page |   62 ++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
 1 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/stopwatch.page b/help/C/stopwatch.page
index 434f175..55658ad 100644
--- a/help/C/stopwatch.page
+++ b/help/C/stopwatch.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#stopwatch"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-10" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,53 +15,53 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Use the stopwatch to measure the time taken to finish a task.</desc>
+    <desc>Use the stopwatch to measure the time that you take to finish a
+    task.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Clock your best times</title>
 
-  <p>A stopwatch can be used to measure the different parts of a task while
-  also keeping track of the total time taken to finish the whole task. It is
-  often used by athletes to measure the time taken to cover each lap and the
-  time taken to cover the entire distance of the race.</p>
+  <p>Use the stopwatch to measure the time that it takes to complete different
+  parts of a task while also keeping track of the total time that it takes to
+  finish the whole task. It is often used by athletes to measure the time taken
+  to run each lap and the time taken to cover the entire distance. By timing
+  each lap, they are able to tell if their sleep changes from lap to lap.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To use the stopwatch:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Stopwatch</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Start</gui> button to start the
-      stopwatch.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Start</gui> to start the stopwatch.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-    <list>
-      <title>After completing one phase of the task:</title>
-      <item>
-       <p>If you want to time the next phase immediately, press the
-       <gui style="button">Lap</gui> button. This will clock the time taken
-       for the current phase in the table and start the timer for the next
-       phase.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-       <p>If you want to time the next phase after a break, press the
-       <gui style="button">Stop</gui> button to pause the stopwatch. You can
-       press the <gui style="button">Continue</gui> button when you are ready
-       to use the stopwatch again.</p>
-      </item>
-    </list>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>You can use the <gui style="button">Reset</gui> button to reset the
-      stop clock at any time. You can also press it when you have finished
-      using the stopwatch.</p>
+      <p>After completing one phase of the task:</p>
+      <list>
+        <item>
+               <p>Press <gui style="button">Lap</gui> to record the end of the first
+          phase and to start timing the next phase.</p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p>Press <gui style="button">Stop</gui> to pause the stopwatch and
+          <gui style="button">Continue</gui> when you are ready to resume
+          timing the task.</p>
+        </item>
+      </list>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>You can use the <gui style="button">Reset</gui> button to reset the
+  stopwatch when it is stopped.</p>
+
   <note style="info">
-    <p>Unless the stopwatch is reset or <app>Clocks</app> is restarted, the
-    times clocked by the stopwatch are not disturbed.</p>
+    <p>Your lap times and total time will be lost when you reset the stopwatch
+    or restart <app>Clocks</app>.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>