[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 65/68] Review alarm-snooze-stop help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit ebe271b879ccf9d31e116482c2f87958e3de3bf5
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 22:39:20 2013 +0100

    Review alarm-snooze-stop help page
    
    Remove the terms list because it's obvious that snooze is snooze and
    stop is stop.

 help/C/alarm-snooze-stop.page |   28 +++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/alarm-snooze-stop.page b/help/C/alarm-snooze-stop.page
index 1b6659d..a0f6808 100644
--- a/help/C/alarm-snooze-stop.page
+++ b/help/C/alarm-snooze-stop.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#alarm-clock"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,24 +15,22 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Stop the alarm, or set it to go off ten minutes later.</desc>
+    <desc>Stop the alarm or set it to go off nine minutes later.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Stop or snooze your alarm</title>
 
-  <p>When your alarm rings, you can either stop the alarm or snooze it. When
-  you snooze the alarm, the alarm is reset to ring ten minutes later.</p>
-
-  <terms>
-    <item>
-    <title>To snooze the alarm:</title>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Snooze</gui> button.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-    <title>To stop the alarm:</title>
-      <p>Press the <gui style="button">Stop</gui>button.</p>
-    </item>
-  </terms>
+  <p>When your alarm goes off, you can either stop the alarm or snooze it. When
+  you snooze the alarm, the alarm is reset to go off nine minutes later.</p>
+
+  <p>When your alarm goes off, a notification will pop up from your
+  notification tray. If you have <app>Clocks</app> open, you will also see the
+  alarm there.</p>
 
 </page>