[release-notes/gnome-3-10] flesh out the core ux page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 992c647c33becbba5e428ad45afa227d87632089
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 16 14:48:40 2013 +0100

    flesh out the core ux page

 help/C/more-core-ux.page |   26 ++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 15f4e56..b34a7e4 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -18,42 +18,44 @@
 
   <title>Updates to the Core GNOME 3 User Experience</title>
 
-  <p>GNOME 3.10 is packed with new features and enhancements. Here are some more of the many improvements 
that can be found in the latest version of the core user experience.</p>
+  <p>GNOME 3.10 has many other new features and enhancements. Here are some more of the many improvements 
that can be found in the latest version.</p>
 
   <section id="lock-screen">
     <title>Customize Your Lock Screen</title>
-    <p>It is now possible to set a different image on your lock screen.</p>
+    <p>From 3.10, it is possible to set a different image for your lock screen. This gives greater scope for 
personalization, and helps to differentiate the lock screen from your session. The lock screen image can be 
changed from the <app>Background Settings</app></p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/lock-screen.png"/>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="smart-cards">
-    <title>Smart Card Support</title>
-    <p>Smart Cards are now supported as an alternate way to log in or unlock the screen. Smart Card removal 
can be configured to lock the screen or force log out. Password authentication can now be disabled, forcing 
just fingerprint or Smart Card authentication.</p>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="scrolling">
     <title>Fine Scrolling</title>
-    <p>An extra mode that allows precise scrolling in long documents, pages and lists.</p>
+    <p>Scroll bars now feature a new mode that allows fine scrolling. This particularly useful if the 
scrolled area is very large, and allows precise movements within a small area. To activate fine scrolling, 
just press and hold the scroll bar handle, or hold shift and click it.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="cantarell">
-    <title>Major Font Improvements</title>
-    <p>Cantarell, the GNOME font, has had a big update for 3.10. Glyph coverage has been extended, based on 
our translation completion data and includes extra maths symbols. The regular weight has received radical 
spacing improvements and some highly exposed outlines have been improved (basic Latin + numerals). Similar 
ongoing work is happening for the bold weight. Also extended Latin accents.</p>
+    <title>A More Beautiful and Legible Font</title>
+    <p>Cantarell, the GNOME font, has had a big update for 3.10. Glyph coverage has been extended so that 
more languages are supported, and the shape and spacing of existing letters has been improved. The result is 
a more beautiful interface font which is easier to read.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/font-improvements.png"/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="settings">
     <title>Settings</title>
-    <p>Date &amp; Time, Displays, Chat accounts in GOA, Universal Access, add user account overhaul.</p>
+    <p>A number of areas in <app>Settings</app> have been enhanced for GNOME 3.10. The <gui>Date &amp; 
Time</gui> settings have been overhauled to be easier to use, and now have a bigger, better looking time zone 
map and clearer options. The <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> settings also include a new option to automatically 
set ... </p>
+    <p>It is now easier to manage your screens and displays, thanks no the new <gui>Displays</gui>, Chat 
accounts in GOA, <gui>Universal Access</gui>, add user account overhaul.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/time-and-date.png"/>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="smart-cards">
+    <title>Smart Card Support</title>
+    <p>Smart cards are now supported as an alternate way to log in and unlock. Primarily of interest to 
enterprise GNOME deployments, smart cards can be configured as the primary authentication method, and 
password access can be disabled. It is also possible to configure whether removing a smart card locks or ends 
the user session.</p>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+  </section>
+
   <section id="core-ux-other">
     <title>Other Improvements</title>
     <p>Other enhancements to the core user experience include:</p>
     <list>
+      <item><p>The application launching view now has pages rather than being scrolled, and has had many 
other layout and animation improvements. Pages make it easier to find the application you are looking for, 
and integrates application folders much more effectively.</p></item>
       <item><p>Improved login screen - better layout, nicer transitions</p></item>
       <item><p>Better transition for screen lock and blank</p></item>
       <item><p>Prettier lock screen notifications</p></item>