[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 33/39] Review alarm-edit help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit d693aa83ea39edc580a0f3c2df6958bbcdc6465f
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 22:08:08 2013 +0100

    Review alarm-edit help page

 help/C/alarm-edit.page |   23 +++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/alarm-edit.page b/help/C/alarm-edit.page
index 64c7c1f..c2ef95f 100644
--- a/help/C/alarm-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/alarm-edit.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#alarm-clock"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,27 +15,30 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Change the alarm information.</desc>
+    <desc>Update your alarm or temporarily disable it.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Edit existing alarm</title>
+  <title>Edit an alarm</title>
 
-  <p>If you want to change the time at which your alarm rings, or make other
-  changes to the alarm information, you can edit your alarms.</p>
+  <p>Edit your alarm to change when it goes off, rename it or to deactivate
+  it.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Press the <gui style="button">Alarm</gui> button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the alarm you wish to edit.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Make the desired changes.</p>
+      <p>Press the alarm which you want to edit.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Press <gui style="button">Done</gui> to finish editing the alarm.</p>
+      <p>Update the alarm and press <gui style="button">Done</gui> to finish
+      editing it.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>