[gnome-clocks/wip/mallard-help: 32/39] Review alarm-add help page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 6640294188cc0271da01c3a10bd330bd6e178d97
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Sep 15 22:01:45 2013 +0100

    Review alarm-add help page

 help/C/alarm-add.page |   29 +++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/alarm-add.page b/help/C/alarm-add.page
index c8994e9..0525a65 100644
--- a/help/C/alarm-add.page
+++ b/help/C/alarm-add.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#alarm-clock"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" date="2013-09-02" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-15" status="candidate"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -15,17 +15,21 @@
       <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Use alarms to set reminders for yourself.</desc>
+    <desc>Use an alarm to set reminder for yourself.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Add an alarm</title>
 
-  <p>If you want to be reminded at a certain time with an alarm, create an
-  alarm on <app>Clocks</app>. The alarm starts ringing at the set time.</p>
+  <p>You can add an alarm for specific days of the week. It will go off
+  regardless of whether <app>Clocks</app> is open or not.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To add an alarm:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Alarm</gui>.</p>
     </item>
@@ -33,22 +37,23 @@
       <p>Press <gui style="button">New</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Choose the time at which you want the alarm to go off by using the
-      <gui style="button">+</gui> and <gui style="button">-</gui> buttons.</p>
+      <p>Set the time when you want the alarm to go off.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Give your alarm a name.</p>
+      <p>You can give your new alarm a name so that it is easier to
+      identify.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the days on which you want the alarm to be repeated at the
-      selected time.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Switch on or switch off your alarm as per your requirements.</p>
+      set time.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <gui style="button">Done</gui> to finish adding the alarm.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>You can <link xref="alarm-edit">temporarily disable your alarm</link> if
+  you do not want to use it for a while.</p>
+
+  <p>Your alarm will not go off if your computer is switched off.</p>
 </page>