[gnome-nibbles] help: a couple small grammar fixups
- From: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-nibbles] help: a couple small grammar fixups
- Date: Sat, 14 Sep 2013 23:02:38 +0000 (UTC)
commit 6a4217b5199303bc07eb43adeb1ecd52715a83e5
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro gnome org>
Date: Sat Sep 14 17:47:07 2013 -0500
help: a couple small grammar fixups
help/C/scores.page | 12 ++++++------
1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index 390fd24..998616a 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -74,18 +74,18 @@
<media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/ice-cream.svg" height="22" width="22"/> :
This bonus causes a greater increase in the length of the worm than
the donut-shaped bonus. The points given by this bonus vary
- depending on the level number and the length of the worm. Higher
- the level number and longer the worm, more the points scored on
- eating this bonus.</p>
+ depending on the level number and the length of the worm. The higher
+ the level number and the longer the worm, the more the points are scored
+ on eating this bonus.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>The cherry-shaped bonus
<media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/cherry.svg" height="22" width="22"/> :
This bonus causes a
decrease in the length of the worm. The points given by this bonus
- depend on the level number and the length of the worm. Higher the level
- number and longer the worm, more the points scored on eating this
- bonus.</p>
+ depend on the level number and the length of the worm. The higher the
+ level number and the longer the worm, the more the points are scored on
+ eating this bonus.</p>
</item>
</list>
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