[gnome-nibbles] help: a couple small grammar fixups



commit 6a4217b5199303bc07eb43adeb1ecd52715a83e5
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro gnome org>
Date:   Sat Sep 14 17:47:07 2013 -0500

    help: a couple small grammar fixups

 help/C/scores.page |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index 390fd24..998616a 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -74,18 +74,18 @@
        <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/ice-cream.svg" height="22" width="22"/> :
         This bonus causes a greater increase in the length of the worm than
         the donut-shaped bonus. The points given by this bonus vary
-        depending on the level number and the length of the worm. Higher
-        the level number and longer the worm, more the points scored on
-        eating this bonus.</p>
+        depending on the level number and the length of the worm. The higher
+        the level number and the longer the worm, the more the points are scored
+        on eating this bonus.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
        <p>The cherry-shaped bonus
        <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/cherry.svg" height="22" width="22"/> :
         This bonus causes a
        decrease in the length of the worm. The points given by this bonus
-       depend on the level number and the length of the worm. Higher the level
-       number and longer the worm, more the points scored on eating this
-       bonus.</p>
+       depend on the level number and the length of the worm. The higher the
+       level number and the longer the worm, the more the points are scored on
+       eating this bonus.</p>
       </item>
     </list>
 


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